Forever young

Forever young

A Poem by Tony Jordan
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A thought in the style of Jimmy Yetts and Andrew Mitchell

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Drinking from the fountain of youth 
requires that one isn't swayed by 
what others think of the 'taste'...

© 2016 Tony Jordan


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very thought provoking ... and i believe quite true ...as we learn to accept our true selves ...what others think, takes the seat at the back of the line or i think you are right ..our health/youth suffers .. i like where your haiku-like, Mitchell/Yetts poem takes me :)
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

forever young says i!!! ;)
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

well said E !
Hey that sounds familiar...lol
;p
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

:) .................



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Indeed, Tony.
Anything that affects belief affects outcome.
Profound insight!
Your gracious reference has immortalized me.
Thank you.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

You were well immortalised Jimmy before I met you!!
Your welcome my friend.
Thank yo.. read more
Excellent writing Tony, yes isn't life/youth a matter of taste as is writing lol masterfully done I might add!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Andrew! Why didn't you tell me you had left this review?
lol
Sorry mate, I completely.. read more
Hah well being young does have its merits but its not that good, I can tell you that 😉
Nicely penned ☺

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

oh sh.....ugar
wasn't me Gee - wasn't me - she made me say it - had my arm up my back and eve.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Hahaha reminds me of 'Conjuring' "she made me do it" 😂😂😂
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Yes master... I obey...
Excellent, short and pithy. Yes I said pithy. So good I wish I'd thought of it. Takes experience to know these things.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Deep Joy to see you writey all over this pithyfulolicus my friend and gratings for your wordy wisdy... read more
there are still some sips of youth that this old tongue tastes...and youth or age...is really a state of mind...and we all live in different states.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

No offense intended here Jacob but my old dad was wiley as a fox and he used to say 'Don't let the g.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Damn...manners
Thank you very much J
True indeed.
Many would go for the chance to be young again regardless what the others think

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Its a bit controversial Shabeeh and I may seem contrdictory but... I mean who would want to go throu.. read more
Shabeeh Haider

7 Years Ago

You have a point...lol.

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