stop trying to get me into romance, gotta keep the manly hermit act! i can't resist the lyrical beauty of unwavering passion like this!
(i once, long time ago, wrote something named "sinful summer club", i dont know why but this combined with the color red reminds me of it)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Your edifices are crumbling from those tumbling and squelching cow carcasses Winter.
You'll .. read moreYour edifices are crumbling from those tumbling and squelching cow carcasses Winter.
You'll be a quivering romantic again if you aren't careful.
I like autobiographical sound of 'Sinful Summer Club' - heh heh
I absolutely love this! You can really feel the heat and passion, and this poem captivated me as much as you're captivated by the poem's subject. Amazing work!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
A captivation that became an infatuation then an addiction...such a slippery slope...
Thank y.. read moreA captivation that became an infatuation then an addiction...such a slippery slope...
Thank you for your kind review Fanicia E !!
:)
I'm sorry I missed this review M.P.
High-functioning romantic - I love that phrase you've co.. read moreI'm sorry I missed this review M.P.
High-functioning romantic - I love that phrase you've coined. I can drop into the mush too but it really takes such an effort to get back out of it.
Thank you very much M.P.
:)
7 Years Ago
no worries man! last time i was in the mush i escaped clean but i had to leave my shoes!
7 Years Ago
Haha - hmm... I have some shoes that I wouldn't mind losing but there are two pair that I would hate.. read moreHaha - hmm... I have some shoes that I wouldn't mind losing but there are two pair that I would hate to lose - even to love - lol.
:))
stop trying to get me into romance, gotta keep the manly hermit act! i can't resist the lyrical beauty of unwavering passion like this!
(i once, long time ago, wrote something named "sinful summer club", i dont know why but this combined with the color red reminds me of it)
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Your edifices are crumbling from those tumbling and squelching cow carcasses Winter.
You'll .. read moreYour edifices are crumbling from those tumbling and squelching cow carcasses Winter.
You'll be a quivering romantic again if you aren't careful.
I like autobiographical sound of 'Sinful Summer Club' - heh heh
Beautifully written. Your choice of words, and the flow of this poem is really amazing.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
I'm very happy that you liked this Angeliki.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read a.. read moreI'm very happy that you liked this Angeliki.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review it.
Just writing to get it out
My avatar is an actual slice of an onion that I cut up and I kept and froze - it reminds me of the saying - If you don't laugh, you cry. more..