to me...

skimming the surface - hoping to gradually unearth a buried heart

Your gaze... 

~ my love ~

tender steel

flaming flowers

Your laughter... 

~ my angel ~

thrilling 

unforgettable 

Your breath... 

~ my darling ~

a lullaby at night

an anthem in day

Your kiss... 

~ my delight ~

luxurious and

heart stopping

******

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm always surprised kinda when I read something romantic by you lol maybe I'm used to reading your funny or realistic writes but this one reads wonderful. Almost as if you wrote this in a dream like state of mind. ;) Love it all, Tony. And one of my favourites too (:

[Tony Jordan]

Hey Yumna...you and me both. I forgot I had a nice side lmao...
aww but thanks for your comments - I know you have migrated into this genre with aplomb.
Did I say migrated - I meant eloped - lol ;p

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahahah I guess that eloping failed lol so I'm back to being a rambling soul ;
Glad to see your nice side then 😉😛 you're welcome, Tony. :))

[Tony Jordan]

Much better than my back side. !!!

Rambler bus tickets here are very cheap - I hope the rambler ticket you get helps you to find yourself. :))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well I'm almost on the verge of getting the insanity ticket over my ramblings lol so idk if finding myself would even help hahah 😛😂

[Giulia King]

"Your breath...
~ my darling ~
a lullaby at night
an anthem in day"
I love this poem. It's so beautiful!!

[Barbara Borel]

So Romantic. Most loving enduring words. Sweetness from the heart written in words. Lovely

[Jimmy Yetts]

(At first, I thought this was dedicated to you.)
Truly lovely lyrics, Tony.
A heart-to-heart transmission!

[Tony Jordan]

Haha - love that idea.
I think a letter to myself might go somewhat differently Jimmy.
read moreHaha - love that idea.
I think a letter to myself might go somewhat differently Jimmy.
Thank you for your visits. You always make me smile.
:) - see

[Valentine]

Talk like this to her and I imagine she will be sticking around. Valentine

[Tony Jordan]

Ahh ...and there will be flying pigs :(
- don't mind me -
Thank you very much for your kind words Kathie.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for sharing this poetic piece filled with emotional bursts at all the right places.

I will return.

alisa

[Tony Jordan]

Bursting out? - does my heart look big in this... lol
Nah... kidding. I rather like that Alisa.
Thank you reviewing and making me smile affectionately

[Alisa Js]

You're quite welcome, Tony.

I look forward to reading your thoughts on some of my work, when you have time..

Until then, may your wishes all be granted...

Alisa

[Michael X]

wow, this poem is romantic. "tender steel, flaming flowers" you can definitely feel the poetic voice through the form!

[Tony Jordan]

That's very encouraging Michael X. Thank you so much!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this does the unearthing awfully well...especially with those oxymorons of tender steel and flaming flowers...and the poem within the poem.

j.

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you for the supportive review j.
I appreciate it very much.