to me...

skimming the surface - hoping to gradually unearth a buried heart

Your gaze... 

~ my love ~

tender steel

flaming flowers

Your laughter... 

~ my angel ~

thrilling 

unforgettable 

Your breath... 

~ my darling ~

a lullaby at night

an anthem in day

Your kiss... 

~ my delight ~

luxurious and

heart stopping

******

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm always surprised kinda when I read something romantic by you lol maybe I'm used to reading your funny or realistic writes but this one reads wonderful. Almost as if you wrote this in a dream like state of mind. ;) Love it all, Tony. And one of my favourites too (:

[Tony Jordan]

Hey Yumna...you and me both. I forgot I had a nice side lmao...
aww but thanks for your comments - I know you have migrated into this genre with aplomb.
Did I say migrated - I meant eloped - lol ;p

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahahah I guess that eloping failed lol so I'm back to being a rambling soul ;
Glad to see your nice side then 😉😛 you're welcome, Tony. :))

[Tony Jordan]

Much better than my back side. !!!

Rambler bus tickets here are very cheap - I hope the rambler ticket you get helps you to find yourself. :))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Well I'm almost on the verge of getting the insanity ticket over my ramblings lol so idk if finding myself would even help hahah 😛😂

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah Tony you are weakening in your dotage and taking up the mantle of romantic! A nice simple piece filled with metaphors capturing your perspective of each facet you value.

[Wickedren]

Wow! What a wonderful way of defining your love Tony!

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you for the delightful review Wickedren.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

To me....it is so beautiful....I would want to hear them whispered in my dreams. EXCELLENT!

[Tony Jordan]

Queenie could any romantic writer wish for anything more? What a heart-stopping review. Thank you so much.

[Ardra]

Beautiful lines....like they way write it....
Your laughter...
~ my angel ~
thrilling
unforgettable

:)

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you for reading and reviewing this one Ria. I appreciate your visit.
:)

[FIN]

Beautiful.

"Your gaze...
~ my love ~
tender steel
flaming flowers"


"Your breath...
~ my darling ~
a lullaby at night
an anthem in day"

Loved these lines.

Much love,

LR

[Tony Jordan]

You're always very kind LR.
Thank you
:)

[Ken Simm.]

Lovely. A description that goes beyond just looking and into other regions altogether.

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you Ken for a really lovely poetical review.
:))

[andrew mitchell]

I hope she leaves the tap on , on flowing love because this will cause withdrawals if she stops. A lovely write Tony. Beautiful in the making Sir!

[Tony Jordan]

I'm truly buoyed up by your words Andrew. You're not averse to the romantic verses yourself I have noticed - so I take this review as a huge compliment. Thank you my friend!!

[Hi]

It strikes me that if you mix it up some it might me a nice alternate way of writing it too. Each stanza with the same words; just the order of lines mixed some. Either way, I like it.

[Tony Jordan]

Yes, yes, I think I know where you're coming from Matt.
To be honest I had consigned this to the bin but hadnt gotten round to deleting it but now you have piqued my interest in breathing some new life into it.
Thank you very much Matt.
"watch this space" - as they say lol

[Pete]

a very sweet and loving write. beautiful thoughts.

[Tony Jordan]

Sorry I missed this kind review Pete. Im very encouraged by your words, thank you.
Happy New Year my friend!