to me...

to me...

A Poem by Tony Jordan
"

skimming the surface - hoping to gradually unearth a buried heart

"
Your gaze... 
~ my love ~
tender steel
flaming flowers

Your laughter... 
~ my angel ~
thrilling 
unforgettable 

Your breath... 
~ my darling ~
a lullaby at night
an anthem in day

Your kiss... 
~ my delight ~
luxurious and
heart stopping

******

© 2016 Tony Jordan


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I'm always surprised kinda when I read something romantic by you lol maybe I'm used to reading your funny or realistic writes but this one reads wonderful. Almost as if you wrote this in a dream like state of mind. ;) Love it all, Tony. And one of my favourites too (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Hahahah I guess that eloping failed lol so I'm back to being a rambling soul ;
Glad to see yo.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Much better than my back side. !!!

Rambler bus tickets here are very cheap - I hope t.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Well I'm almost on the verge of getting the insanity ticket over my ramblings lol so idk if finding .. read more



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Ah Tony you are weakening in your dotage and taking up the mantle of romantic! A nice simple piece filled with metaphors capturing your perspective of each facet you value.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I'm always surprised kinda when I read something romantic by you lol maybe I'm used to reading your funny or realistic writes but this one reads wonderful. Almost as if you wrote this in a dream like state of mind. ;) Love it all, Tony. And one of my favourites too (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Hahahah I guess that eloping failed lol so I'm back to being a rambling soul ;
Glad to see yo.. read more
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Much better than my back side. !!!

Rambler bus tickets here are very cheap - I hope t.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Well I'm almost on the verge of getting the insanity ticket over my ramblings lol so idk if finding .. read more
Wow! What a wonderful way of defining your love Tony!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the delightful review Wickedren.
To me....it is so beautiful....I would want to hear them whispered in my dreams. EXCELLENT!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Queenie could any romantic writer wish for anything more? What a heart-stopping review. Thank you .. read more
Beautiful lines....like they way write it....
Your laughter...
~ my angel ~
thrilling
unforgettable

:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing this one Ria. I appreciate your visit.
:)
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FIN
Beautiful.

"Your gaze...
~ my love ~
tender steel
flaming flowers"


"Your breath...
~ my darling ~
a lullaby at night
an anthem in day"

Loved these lines.

Much love,

LR

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

You're always very kind LR.
Thank you
:)
Lovely. A description that goes beyond just looking and into other regions altogether.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Thank you Ken for a really lovely poetical review.
:))
I hope she leaves the tap on , on flowing love because this will cause withdrawals if she stops. A lovely write Tony. Beautiful in the making Sir!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

I'm truly buoyed up by your words Andrew. You're not averse to the romantic verses yourself I have n.. read more
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Hi
It strikes me that if you mix it up some it might me a nice alternate way of writing it too. Each stanza with the same words; just the order of lines mixed some. Either way, I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Yes, yes, I think I know where you're coming from Matt.
To be honest I had consigned this to .. read more
a very sweet and loving write. beautiful thoughts.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Sorry I missed this kind review Pete. Im very encouraged by your words, thank you.
Happy New .. read more

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