Love you...no more

You are no longer mine.
The heart beats slower.
If see you, I'll pass by,
My head I'll lower.

What's your name again?
Your image eyes forgot.
Those, who weren't in pain
Never loved.

I don't cry, don't weep
Honestly, I never did.
The heart cannot forgive
The one who made it bleed.

Sometimes I think of...
Love...Intresting thing.
Everyone lives to love,
I loved to live.

I love you no more.
Bye, beloved, bye.
I wait no longer for...
I'll say nothing at your "Hi".

But now, see, I can't...
I'm fine, just...
No longer, my friend
I'm able to trust.

I locked myself in a chamber
Holding a bottle to whet.
All write to remember,
I write to forget

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

The last two line feel very good, though void, they are clear and obvious to a person who had let you down...
I liked your thoughts and also respect them too... life is as such and I can well understand the feelings in this poem... they turn alive in my case...
great work done!!
Anindita : )

[Howard Savage]

Great poem, Love you no more. You know love is a funny thing and it's funny how love can slip away. These words The heart can't forgive the one that made it bleed. If you are writing to forget you never will, This poem to me is predicated on that fact that you are still in love. Live and love life. Great writing friend.