Don't be sad,  my angel

Don't be sad, my angel

A Poem by Antonina Dutchak

Don't be sad, my angel, don't weep
Wipe away those tears.
The eternal happiness you seek
You'll have no more fears.

You'll find someone
Who'll be beside you
You'll find the faithful one.
You won't be blue.

The best of people-not fair -
The most unhappy are.
They search for support in vain
Sincere are spared by noone.

Don't be sad. Look, here
Here I stand.
I'm not just silent looker
I'll give you my hand.

No matter where will I be
Among unknown souls
Through deserts, sees
I'll run back, just call.

© 2016 Antonina Dutchak


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Caring sentiments expressed for a friend who is feeling doubtful or confused or sad. I like your well-worded message and your rhyming is pretty good (in a couple places, it feels like you're reaching to get the rhyme, but it's not distracting to the reading). I wonder if "looker" in the 4th stanza might be better as "onlooker"? Just a thought. The best part is the ending, where the narrator is reaching out & offering his/herself.

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