Sparks

Sparks in the air,
What could even compare.

Spark after spark fill my eyes,
O,who could despise.

Sparks all around me,
O,How cant we be.

Sparks in my head,
O,God I never said.

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Truly intriguing. I can't quite grasp your meaning but nevertheless it is a well rounded poem with all the right angles. o.O I may not make sense sometimes. I am senile at times, but anyways...I will keep my rambling to a minimum. ^^* Anyway I like this.

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u and ramble on its ok