I Want

its how i feel

My heart wants
what she flaunts
oh,how he haunts
my soul as black as coal

Author's Note

watcha think

Reviews

[A Teenage Girl]

I really like it, very catchy and mysterious. Wonderful job. (:

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Amazing :D
What I think is that this is honestly a great poem.
" my soul as black as coal" love this line :)
Great poetry! c:
100/100

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u, ur really sweet

[Jason Dyer]

Short, sweet and to the point. Keep it up.

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u

[Amanda J. S.]

Sad. Really dark :-(

[Toni Blackerby]

its wat i was going for :)

[Amanda J. S.]

Then it's really correctly hit!

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u

[Amanda J. S.]

No Problemo ^^