He Is......

i wrote it for a reason which i can not describe its a hard emotion to talk about

So strong is he,
So weak am I,
So happy he seems,
So much sadness i beam,
So with her he is,
So alone am I.

Author's Note

tell me what u think

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Its a sad piece, short and simply yet it said a lot, thank you for sharing.

[Toni Blackerby]

thank you very much

[f**k you]

The structure is super refreshing. You've made a very general theme something very personal, just in the way it's worded, which is a really cool effect.

-nicole-was-here

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u ur very kind