The Promise Land

I watched the prince of Egypt and thought of this

A land flowing with milk and honey,
The promise land.
Everything you need or want is there.
Can you even bear to think of it?
Its to amazing to compare.

Author's Note

i wanna know wat u think i dont think its good at all

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this Toni Blackerby! Your imagery is quite wonderful and gives the audience perfect imagination to work with or add onto in their minds. When I read this, the promise land I thought of was Heaven. Because it's amazing and promises us so much happiness and everything we'd ever need. So this poem reminded me of Heaven when it especially says

"Can you even bear
to think of it, Its to
amazing to compare." Well it should be like this "Can you even bear to think of it?
It's too amazing to compare." That's how I'd write it, but do as you please girl :) great job once again.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u very much :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're very welcome :)