Clock On My Wall

I was in class and i thought of it

Tic toc said the clock
On my wall

Tic toc said the clock
Oh,how I fear to fall

Tic toc said the clock
As I lie awake

Tic toc said the clock
My soul he will take

Tic toc said the clock
He is always in my head

Tic toc said the clock
He will never be in my bed

Tic toc said the clock
On my wall

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is a very simple poem that conveys well the tedium of a clock ticking. Nice flow and nice structure. One typo in the third verse, should be: 'As I lie awake'

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u and ill fix it