Dark Angel

i thought of it a sec ago not sure if its gunna be good

The Dark Angel rides at night
In us all he lives and thrives
He drives with a passion
That well never die,
as you will know by his eye
An eye so calm yet so filled with pain
I wish only to gain him

Author's Note

i wanna know what u think

Reviews

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

not bad, if u need help on your writing or whatever, call me and give me a time you wanna hang and ill help you out some... Writing is a gift that you seem to have, just let me show you a few things and you will be even better than me on day.


---- Anthony Armstrong.

[Toni Blackerby]

ok i will ps iv seen ur stuff and im not gunna be better than u

[C.A. Lucas]

It's cool. I like it a lot. The rhyming could be better, I guess, but it's taken me years to get where I am now with rhyming (not very far)

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u but i wasnt tryin i wrote it in like 5 mins

[C.A. Lucas]

awesome @o_o@

[Toni Blackerby]

thanx