Pain

you tell me what you think it means

Teardrops fill my wrists will a painful burning fire.
The pain hurts me so,but better to feel pain
Than nothing at all

Author's Note

i want ur comments

Reviews

[C.A. Lucas]

That's really beautiful and really powerful. It has a very mysterious aura. I like it.

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u and i love how u put it

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Oh what a wonderful write, how many know the feelings of the thought inside our minds that tell us, it is far better to feel the burn of self-inflicted pain than to go numb feeling nothing at all hiding from the pain the world does offer. I love the way to let pain become beautiful pain in your writes. We hurt til we wonder what’s the point, we write looking for who knows, we dream of life different, then one day unexpectedly...it happens, we find beauty in this world in the least expected place...us! Love your writings...simple and powerful!

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u and thats really sweet

[Muse]

Pain reminds us...that we are alive

[Toni Blackerby]

my point