Whisper

its what i hear everyday at school

So loud is my word,but so strange that nothing.
Nothing but a whisper
All shuffled into one big murmur.
So loud is my world,But
So quiet is my soul.

Author's Note

i really want all of your opinions on this poem

Reviews

[C.A. Lucas]

I like it lot. This is one of my favorite poems of yours.

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Not bad Toni, not bad at all. But mine are better. Your bestestest friend Anthony

[Toni Blackerby]

lol nice and i do think urs r better

[ShelWars]

Very well done.

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u

[ShelWars]

Your welcome! Happy I could review!

[rnuff]

this says alot really. It's a deepness inside that wants to scream but hold it all in as a whisper. WELL written.

[Toni Blackerby]

Thank u so much