Fate

Fate

A Poem by Toni Blackerby
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its how i feel about life sort of

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The cold chill of fate,
Always holds its heavy head over me.
Daylight and moonlight blend to make,
Fate
The same fate it seems to me that never changes
heartbreak and heartache.
yet i always hope for happiness
but
Fate never agrees
Fate chooses who is to love you and who is to leave you
I wonder if fate makes everything what it is
i wonder if it is my fate  to be alone
I wonder?

© 2012 Toni Blackerby


Author's Note

Toni Blackerby
i know its not perfect i know its not all good but give me ur comments anyway i love to read them

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Yes a sad write, well expressed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Toni Blackerby

12 Years Ago

thank u
This is very sad... I don't think anyone is destined to be alone, I really don't....

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Toni Blackerby

12 Years Ago

it was meant to be sad but i think ur right
Amanda J. S.

12 Years Ago

:-)

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Added on September 8, 2012
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Toni Blackerby
Toni Blackerby

lewisburg, TN



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Im very.......weird but I love to write. but there will be some mistakes cuz I aint that good :) I hope you like my stuff. Also please do not judge me on the way I look I know im not much to look at b.. more..

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