I had to look up the meaning of Incels, as I had never heard the word before. It is as follows: "a member of an online community of young men who consider themselves unable to attract women sexually, typically associated with views that are hostile towards women and men who are sexually active". Dear God! What has happened to our human nature? What a horrific way to live and very scary too! Can't even begin to imagine how a human being could 'love' a robot and not another human being. Boggles my mind, dear Tom! Artificial Intelligence will be the end of us. There is now a very dangerous and threatening canyon between mankind and AI. Where will it end. I love how you brought The Wizard of Oz into the story, Tom and the human computer laughing at human beings who believed, something akin to the creators of AI laughing at the public while making zillions of Euro at the same time. I believe that one day mankind will extinguish its own life on planet earth and in the process murder earth with it. You have done an amazing job in this very revealing gem and with a sense of humour which I seem to be devoid of having read it, lol... Well done, Tom! Outstanding write... Kudo's dear friend...
Posted 4 Months Ago
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4 Months Ago
Your thoughts very much parallel my own Marie, thanks as always for your welcome visit!
Many thanks for a listen or three of how to accept that Humanity is becoming more electronically and 'whatever' terrifying ever day. Re. grammar, what will we do without declensions as well as descendants in all points of the universe.. in time or not? Will return for part two.. what happened to the boy that handnt' a toy.. and became both overjoyed and coy.. same time? Too casual or poor a review or do you understand as you so often do, sir!?
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Thank you EmmaJoy, ah well yes, think I understand some of what you're saying by way of interpret of.. read moreThank you EmmaJoy, ah well yes, think I understand some of what you're saying by way of interpret of my poem but maybe you could elusidate a little further, I'm really quite a simple kinda man?
Need rush off but heard three bars.. know it, love it.. will listen more later. :)
10 Months Ago
That was long delay, so sorry. I guess I was damning non-human creativity - however supposedly amus.. read moreThat was long delay, so sorry. I guess I was damning non-human creativity - however supposedly amusing. Chat up lines, a touch of informality a cheeky wink or flutter of mascara surely what matters. A1 or Ai is proxy cloning so am told. Perhaps in the future the truth will out via others privy to more of press keys than pencil or paintbrush weilding creators!
10 Months Ago
Not a 'simple man' but so like the song and the group! Apologies for bringing my soapbox along.
Love this upbeat of replete reality of it does seem to be where we are heading in having chosen to desert our testicular gonads, even our cranial reasoning tads of base primal intelligence, for that which is un-really all too surreally unreal, fake, fraudulent, and distastefully artificial ... Fact is: Man is no longer Man ... Man is Canned (has shite-canned himself), packaged, mass produced, mass shelved and marketed as that which he stupidly wished to wish that he was that would and will never attain to all that he could be, or truly once possessed before setting his t**d of a mind to playing with design of pretending to be the very God that Man, Himself, created as means to deceive, rule, and control the masses of Human Flesh that wiggle and crawl like Cattle to the beck and call of Almight Man clad in clandestine attire of a Supernatural God that is Man designed of not so very benign, gentle, or merciful, because God is Man as Man is God, and Man is a merciless m**********r whenst he is on tearful tear of destroying that he might repair that which never needed fixin' in the first damn place ... Whalla!: A.I.: Artificial Intelligence? ... Advanced Intelligence? ... Alien Intelligence? Ardvark Intelligence? Ant Intelligence? ... Hell no! ... It's ... A*****e-intelligence ...
Tom, this piece is properly and correctly spot on with the way things are and the way things are damn sure going ...
Several years back, maybe a bit long, I wrote (will post) a piece I called Flash Injections, where you go to your doc and get a shot of whatever fantasy world you seek to live and reside in, and as such does appear to be some similar to where the offal is leading us as the littler s***s than they ...
Enjoyed the hell outta this Poem, Tom ... Sure as hell did!
Marve
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Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
howdy Marvin, many thanks for your interesting thoughts on my latest poem, yes indeed, to some exten.. read morehowdy Marvin, many thanks for your interesting thoughts on my latest poem, yes indeed, to some extent man, and I mean the typical 'red blooded human male' that is/was is much the author of his own downfall.
Though I believe far left extremist views play a bit part in his metaphorical castration, and I include female liberalism going too far in my hypothesis.
1 Year Ago
Tom,
I agree with your hypothesis ... As one who strives to to exist as a Moderate (M.. read moreTom,
I agree with your hypothesis ... As one who strives to to exist as a Moderate (Moderate does not mean weak, but willing to listen and reason first, before fisticuffs, and then: Fuckit, Kattie bar the door!) I find myself unwillingly at odds with both extremist factions of the Faaaar Right and the Faaaar Left ... Those who were considered and called Liberals during that era of the 1930's (Corliss Lamont, for example, author of The Illusion of Immortality, copy of which I proudly own) were a different breed's batch of open minded reasoning's thinkers than are those of today ... And as for female liberalism? ... I support Women's Rights, even that of snuffing out the life of their own child, because some son of a butt-b***h man is too girlish to support is own doin's ... But, in all reality, when Women thought to have got and gained their Rights, all they really got was the ultimate shaft of being mind fucked into enslaving themselves, willingly, rather than being enslaved by some arsehole of piece of s**t man ... What's the diff? ... A modern day example of perfected SELF-control and self-deception's SELF-Degradation and SELF-Humiliation, rather than have a worthless man do it for you ... Nothing gained, and everything lost in obfuscation of that withal that was avidly, sincerely, and fervently sought by all Women in the first damn place ... Women have always been smarter than men ... But in this case? ... Women have durn to damn sure outsmarted themselves this go 'round in the battle for logic's sound reasoning of arrival of treating all Human Beings as equitable Human Beings ... Rather than have a Dad, Brother, or Uncle protect them from some a*****e who knocked them up, forced them to make Porn Videos, or put them on the streets to f**k for buck to buy beer for their macho man, Women wanted the Right to protect themselves ... And I agree with the basic concept ... But who the hell is going to protect Women from Women, themselves, who are now willingly turning themselves into all that which they claimed to hate and despise as abuse and misuse by men? ... F****n eat s**t in a rat-hole and go figure that one out ... Sheeesh!
The light came on! ... A.I.: Alzheimer's Inspired! ... For has has reduced his self to speaking only two letters, not even alphabetically, but skipping from "A" to "I" ... LOL!
Have a great rest of your weekend, Tom, and good writing's Muse to you ...
Loved your poem on incel AI community. There is a great transition in society and more after AI is fully developed.
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Yes indeed so, thank you Arundass, are you watching/listening to the big world cup cricket matech? .. read moreYes indeed so, thank you Arundass, are you watching/listening to the big world cup cricket matech? India v Pakistan just about to begin!
What a great write Tom. Pleased for your author’s note, otherwise I would be using google. You know nothing surprises me these days. I have to put the blame on bad parenting. Young men who have led a sheltered, cosseted life, stuck in their bedroom away from real people. As for AÍ, well it doesn’t surprise me at all, what’s in store. An entertaining read. As to the computer irigrannar, you have him summed up to perfection:) Have yourself a good weekend.
Chris
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Mnay thanks Chris, pleased you could relate so! You too, have a great weekend with lots of craic ( .. read moreMnay thanks Chris, pleased you could relate so! You too, have a great weekend with lots of craic ( fun )
I always thought that the term incel was more a whine than a statement, moaning about their lack of looks or charisma and the inability to even make so much as eye contact with a female, let alone converse with them... And then I read about one whine on a forum and stopped wondering.
Why they think their life is so uniquely unfair is possibly, and forgive me if I am wrong, is that they are stuck inside their own head, which therefore means they are the centre of their own universe, just like everyone else on the planet. But I guess that's what happens when kids believe what their parents tell them, that they are special, without the warning that all parents should amend to that statement, that no one outside their direct family, gives a s**t about them and the world is indeed a scary place, especially if you think you are somehow mistreated for your lack of personality or compassion for others.
As you so correctly end with, perhaps their parents should have told them to grow a pair, instead of indulging what can only be described, as their ultimate snowflake syndrome! 😊
I mean, how can anyone even attempt to get through life thinking they are the universes centre, when it is more than obvious that I am... ME ME ME!!! 😊
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
A most indepth contemporary review of my poem, thank you Lorry, yes indeed sir, too much whining, po.. read moreA most indepth contemporary review of my poem, thank you Lorry, yes indeed sir, too much whining, poor timing, ain't no free lunches or silver lining telling young 'uns there so perfectly wonderful while the clock keeps on chiming! 🤯