Incels ..

Incels ..

A Poem by Tom

Incels ..
Read all about it in today's news
Word on the street, latest trends
lovelorn single, straight men, now
prefer to date A.I. girlfriends
easy pickings, to find plethora of virtual
beauties, go online, design perfect woman
stunning looks, compliant mind

No more naff, silly small talk, like
" Hi, do you come here often?"
Gone the risk of rejection, spluttering,
red faced, stammering, stuttering,
even shy, introverted, young bucks
sure to score, grab themselves a winner
heck, don't have to go out for dinner!

Dosen't matter a jot nor a dang
if you're Quasimodo's uglier brother,
cause these computer generated 
beauties, love like a smitten mother,
so obliging, inspire flagging confidence
never call you a stupid jerk,
always compliments, help with homework

Yep, no doubting or backsliding
get with the times or be forever lost
in this crazy world, artificial
intelligence rules, but what's the cost?
Like the Wizard of Oz, hidden in plain
sight, a human computer programmer
sits laughing, mocking those so enamered

Pray tell, why would someone be inclined
feel it neccessary to create such software?
Risk sanity of all humanity? Answer 
is easy, same sad old git, never grew a pair!

© 2023 Tom


Author's Note

Tom
Incel - a member of an online community of young men who consider themselves unable to attract women sexually

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I had to look up the meaning of Incels, as I had never heard the word before. It is as follows: "a member of an online community of young men who consider themselves unable to attract women sexually, typically associated with views that are hostile towards women and men who are sexually active". Dear God! What has happened to our human nature? What a horrific way to live and very scary too! Can't even begin to imagine how a human being could 'love' a robot and not another human being. Boggles my mind, dear Tom! Artificial Intelligence will be the end of us. There is now a very dangerous and threatening canyon between mankind and AI. Where will it end. I love how you brought The Wizard of Oz into the story, Tom and the human computer laughing at human beings who believed, something akin to the creators of AI laughing at the public while making zillions of Euro at the same time. I believe that one day mankind will extinguish its own life on planet earth and in the process murder earth with it. You have done an amazing job in this very revealing gem and with a sense of humour which I seem to be devoid of having read it, lol... Well done, Tom! Outstanding write... Kudo's dear friend...

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

4 Months Ago

Your thoughts very much parallel my own Marie, thanks as always for your welcome visit!
Marie

4 Months Ago

Most welcome always, Tom...



Reviews

Many thanks for a listen or three of how to accept that Humanity is becoming more electronically and 'whatever' terrifying ever day. Re. grammar, what will we do without declensions as well as descendants in all points of the universe.. in time or not? Will return for part two.. what happened to the boy that handnt' a toy.. and became both overjoyed and coy.. same time? Too casual or poor a review or do you understand as you so often do, sir!?

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Need rush off but heard three bars.. know it, love it.. will listen more later. :)
emmajoygreen

10 Months Ago

That was long delay, so sorry. I guess I was damning non-human creativity - however supposedly amus.. read more
emmajoygreen

10 Months Ago

Not a 'simple man' but so like the song and the group! Apologies for bringing my soapbox along.
Tom,

Love this upbeat of replete reality of it does seem to be where we are heading in having chosen to desert our testicular gonads, even our cranial reasoning tads of base primal intelligence, for that which is un-really all too surreally unreal, fake, fraudulent, and distastefully artificial ... Fact is: Man is no longer Man ... Man is Canned (has shite-canned himself), packaged, mass produced, mass shelved and marketed as that which he stupidly wished to wish that he was that would and will never attain to all that he could be, or truly once possessed before setting his t**d of a mind to playing with design of pretending to be the very God that Man, Himself, created as means to deceive, rule, and control the masses of Human Flesh that wiggle and crawl like Cattle to the beck and call of Almight Man clad in clandestine attire of a Supernatural God that is Man designed of not so very benign, gentle, or merciful, because God is Man as Man is God, and Man is a merciless m**********r whenst he is on tearful tear of destroying that he might repair that which never needed fixin' in the first damn place ... Whalla!: A.I.: Artificial Intelligence? ... Advanced Intelligence? ... Alien Intelligence? Ardvark Intelligence? Ant Intelligence? ... Hell no! ... It's ... A*****e-intelligence ...

Tom, this piece is properly and correctly spot on with the way things are and the way things are damn sure going ...

Several years back, maybe a bit long, I wrote (will post) a piece I called Flash Injections, where you go to your doc and get a shot of whatever fantasy world you seek to live and reside in, and as such does appear to be some similar to where the offal is leading us as the littler s***s than they ...

Enjoyed the hell outta this Poem, Tom ... Sure as hell did!

Marve

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Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

howdy Marvin, many thanks for your interesting thoughts on my latest poem, yes indeed, to some exten.. read more
Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

1 Year Ago

Tom,

I agree with your hypothesis ... As one who strives to to exist as a Moderate (M.. read more
Loved your poem on incel AI community. There is a great transition in society and more after AI is fully developed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Yes, sure. Thanks
Tom

1 Year Ago

India getting wicktes as we speak 💅
Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Great, watching. Thank you friend for chatting
What a great write Tom. Pleased for your author’s note, otherwise I would be using google. You know nothing surprises me these days. I have to put the blame on bad parenting. Young men who have led a sheltered, cosseted life, stuck in their bedroom away from real people. As for AÍ, well it doesn’t surprise me at all, what’s in store. An entertaining read. As to the computer irigrannar, you have him summed up to perfection:) Have yourself a good weekend.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Mnay thanks Chris, pleased you could relate so! You too, have a great weekend with lots of craic ( .. read more
Aye this well structured cleverly rhymed poem deals with one aspect that AI may well influence as Incels take refuge in its shadows.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Thanks John, gotta grab a topic by the spondulics and speak out!
I always thought that the term incel was more a whine than a statement, moaning about their lack of looks or charisma and the inability to even make so much as eye contact with a female, let alone converse with them... And then I read about one whine on a forum and stopped wondering.
Why they think their life is so uniquely unfair is possibly, and forgive me if I am wrong, is that they are stuck inside their own head, which therefore means they are the centre of their own universe, just like everyone else on the planet. But I guess that's what happens when kids believe what their parents tell them, that they are special, without the warning that all parents should amend to that statement, that no one outside their direct family, gives a s**t about them and the world is indeed a scary place, especially if you think you are somehow mistreated for your lack of personality or compassion for others.
As you so correctly end with, perhaps their parents should have told them to grow a pair, instead of indulging what can only be described, as their ultimate snowflake syndrome! 😊
I mean, how can anyone even attempt to get through life thinking they are the universes centre, when it is more than obvious that I am... ME ME ME!!! 😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

A most indepth contemporary review of my poem, thank you Lorry, yes indeed sir, too much whining, po.. read more

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