Incels ..

Incels ..

A Poem by Tom

Incels ..
Read all about it in today's news
Word on the street, latest trends
lovelorn single, straight men, now
prefer to date A.I. girlfriends
easy pickings, to find plethora of virtual
beauties, go online, design perfect woman
stunning looks, compliant mind

No more naff, silly small talk, like
" Hi, do you come here often?"
Gone the risk of rejection, spluttering,
red faced, stammering, stuttering,
even shy, introverted, young bucks
sure to score, grab themselves a winner
heck, don't have to go out for dinner!

Dosen't matter a jot nor a dang
if you're Quasimodo's uglier brother,
cause these computer generated 
beauties, love like a smitten mother,
so obliging, inspire flagging confidence
never call you a stupid jerk,
always compliments, help with homework

Yep, no doubting or backsliding
get with the times or be forever lost
in this crazy world, artificial
intelligence rules, but what's the cost?
Like the Wizard of Oz, hidden in plain
sight, a human computer programmer
sits laughing, mocking those so enamered

Pray tell, why would someone be inclined
feel it neccessary to create such software?
Risk sanity of all humanity? Answer 
is easy, same sad old git, never grew a pair!

© 2023 Tom


Author's Note

Tom
Incel - a member of an online community of young men who consider themselves unable to attract women sexually

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I had to look up the meaning of Incels, as I had never heard the word before. It is as follows: "a member of an online community of young men who consider themselves unable to attract women sexually, typically associated with views that are hostile towards women and men who are sexually active". Dear God! What has happened to our human nature? What a horrific way to live and very scary too! Can't even begin to imagine how a human being could 'love' a robot and not another human being. Boggles my mind, dear Tom! Artificial Intelligence will be the end of us. There is now a very dangerous and threatening canyon between mankind and AI. Where will it end. I love how you brought The Wizard of Oz into the story, Tom and the human computer laughing at human beings who believed, something akin to the creators of AI laughing at the public while making zillions of Euro at the same time. I believe that one day mankind will extinguish its own life on planet earth and in the process murder earth with it. You have done an amazing job in this very revealing gem and with a sense of humour which I seem to be devoid of having read it, lol... Well done, Tom! Outstanding write... Kudo's dear friend...

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

4 Months Ago

Your thoughts very much parallel my own Marie, thanks as always for your welcome visit!
Marie

4 Months Ago

Most welcome always, Tom...



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( these computer generated beauties, love like a smitten mother,) Don't you know it~ ~Sharon

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

11 Months Ago

Merci beaucoup dear Miss Sharon 😊
Miss Sharon

11 Months Ago

You are welcome! ~Sharon
A very clever comment on AI….. it’s really getting out of hand…. But I guess in all of humanity there will be those who are really into it…most of us can’t keep up with the advances in AI…..personally I like real humans, be they beautiful or not, brilliant or not…..
Nice write
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Yes I agree with you my friend, thank you for your visit and comments 😎
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome Tom!
Warmly, B
Do you have a number? Or an e. mail perhaps? Smirk.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Lol.. I'd tell you ken but an A.I. android may intercept and I'm not in need of such company!! 😂
Ken Simm.

1 Year Ago

Damn. But a really good piece nontheless. Tick here to prove you are human.
Tom

1 Year Ago

haha 🤣😅😆
ai has taken over so quickly it's alarming. i'm strongly against it, especially ai "art". but ai girlfriend.....is just so objectifying in the literal sense.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Yes isn't it just! Thank you jaye river 😊
A mind and eye opening poem; AI might be good or bad, especially in relationships. I guess those types do not need inflatable dummies. Lol
How about we call them bionic women.
Some desperate men will do anything; I don't doubt it.
A marvelous poem indeed. Unique subject.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

indeed so Sami, I guess beauty's in the eye of the beholder even if it is artificial in design.. Tha.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hehehe. Funny. You are welcome sir Tom.
I declare you husband and AI
Love the song https://youtu.be/8eNoms9wsGc?si=kLZu62Zx09kBSFy1 -I can't help but ask what happens when a Simple Man meets a Janis Joplin?... - he'd get yanked out of that simple life so fast the ice in his glass of liquid honey would trap and embrace a honeybee for future generations to view......now to the review!

Yes, what has happened to this society of ours? I am adamantly skeptical of the multi-faceted AI onslaught that has besieged modern society. Your words of such a community are but a tiny morsel of what is happening to this life of ours on so many levels that I shudder with concern, but then I know it is that which shall prevail as time marches forward to a drum beat of "this is now"! We won't stop it. We can but hope that proper algorithms are introduced to protect us because I am fearful that ANYTHING can be a part of AI if it is designed to infiltrate the system.

Your final words are fitting; we must have the courage to be vigilant and not become as those who fall victim to one who sits chuckling at their supposed brilliance. (I could have asked AI for a response to this. How dang scary is that????)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Thanks again dear Sheila, you review of my poem an excellent, intelligent articulation presenting an.. read more
Sheila Kline

1 Year Ago

"All the king's horses and all the king's men couldn't put Humpty Dumpty back together again. I fee.. read more
An AI girlfriend or boyfriend? Nope, not ready for that. Unfortunately, our world is forgetting how to socially interact in person. It's fast becoming a lost art. Of course, here I am typing to a person I have never seen and telling him (her?) my thoughts. Hmmmm...a tad too easy, n'est pas? Tom, this one makes me think...which is a good thing. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Indeed so Lydia, I'm not downgrading or downsizing the value of humanity's acheivemnets, such modern.. read more
Lydia Shutter

1 Year Ago

And if you are ever in South Florida, let me know!
Tom

1 Year Ago

That's a date! 😎
One good thing about AI sex: You never have to worry about them telling you they're late.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tom

1 Year Ago

Lol.. Or promise them you'll mend that broken fence first thing tomorrow, thank you J the B
appreciate your insight and expression of dismay at the direction of this element of society. In answer to "Pray tell, why would someone be inclined
feel it necessary to create such software?
you know the answer is $$$$$$$. There's no concern in many elements of society for any harm that may result. AI is just the latest tech to fall prey to abuse. I'm sure those concerned minds of past generations felt as much dismay for the use of other then current tech. I will say, however that this one does seem like a continuation of "You're lost inside your houses" (Jackson Brown) and a bit creepy also- carl

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

yes indeed so as in most controversies in life past & present, money almost the root cause or source.. read more
Dear Tom,

People are losing communicational skills, tue ability to connect and relate to other humans purely because of an overdose of technology mainly in the form of mobile telephones and internet. Little wonder, these young men are lost when it comes to dating skill. Here again, AI comes to the rescue, offering maximum gratification for little effort. So it's a vicious circle. This is s brilliant and timely poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

And this analysis/summation of my latest poem is perfectly precise and relevent to what I was hoping.. read more
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

Its always a joy to read your latest poem, dear friend. You're welcome.

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Added on October 12, 2023
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