Still life..

Still life..

A Poem by Tom
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Contemplative

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Pearlescent frog, sat small, silent, squat
just what are you thinking, I know not?
Still life art in diminutive, physical form
as jet black eyes, observe, raging storm 

Permit me close inspection, answer this
are you perturbed or in trance like bliss?
Semiaquatic creature, beguiling, minute,
pray tell, share truth, fate of King Canute?

Bulbous orbs reveal a telepathic cortex
images of man's demise, swirling vortex,
amplified by ignorance, hapless, so blind
inherent his relinquish of ties that bind

And so to avoid the predatory hornbilly
off hopped frog to muse upon waterlily,
grieved, dishearten, like wasted tears
prophetic knowledge, lost on deaf ears!  

© 2023 Tom


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The eyes tell it all; bittersweet; he must sense predators and move about for safety; but I'm sure behind those bulging eyes is a brain, and who knows the smarts of it, but it's sad that this little creature must be on the lookout for predators..... as do humans... who know maybe they are wiser than us... Love your wordage and the photo.
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Many thanks for your visit and perceptive words on the poem new friend! 😉
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome!!
Best B



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A very beautiful descriptive poem which flows effortlessly in perfect rhythm and rhyme in this delightful and very charming poem. I love the term 'pearlescent frog' soooo lovely! Very finely narrated with a great sense of humour. Beautiful pictures created with your poetic brush for your reader to enjoy! And enjoy this amazing poem, I did! The little frog sitting on a tulip is absolutely delightful and complements your words superbly. I think we should learn a lesson from the frog and play deaf more often 😁 Beautiful nature gem, Tom. Thank you for sharing. Have missed your wondrous writes over the past couple of days... Wishing you a very nice evening, dear friend...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Beautiful picture. Frogs are indicators of climate.This frog is waiting for a prey or looking for a place to jump. Good writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

yes indeed so.. Thanks poet for stopping by my way!
Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

It's my pleasure
I love nature poems. This is quite interesting and educational! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. He's a cute, little guy!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

And thank you for your visit and complimentary review!😊
Very interesting writing.
Interesting how you can write something so poetic about something so simple.
Literature is life after all

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Thank indeed, mercie, mercie beaucuup
Abigail

1 Year Ago

My pleasure Tom


honest to goodness Tom, I could contemplate this & the delightful mage that crowns it, your poem that is .. all day long or until all the cows come home whichever comes least soonest .. AGT's Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

or even to the chickens fly aloft to roost...Thanks Neville 🐔🐔🐔
Neville

1 Year Ago


.. indubitably sir Tom 🐮🐂🐂
Those silent moments holstered between action of creatures driven by instinct 🤔 make for great pondering. I like how your imagination works over this little scene of nature. A wonderful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

Thank you Cherrie P, merci, merci 🐦
Maybe he, or she is y thinking of the one that got away, be it a possible partner or a tasty fly when he was looking for a snack.
Or maybe he, or she has discovered how easy he, or she has it, when they hear talk of they big, loud and annoying things called humans, with their excessive waste, and waists, moaning when they have nothing to moan about, and when they do, like mortgage repayments, health insurance and other frivolities that frogs don't seem to need...
Or maybe he's, or she's wondering what that big human is pointing and clicking at him, wishing he, or she was toxic so they could like the human and make him, or her go away, so he, or she can get back to enjoying their day 😊


Posted 1 Year Ago


Tom

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your fine and thoughful review my friend! 🐸
Tom, you really do have a special knack for rhyming! Those eyes can see right through a person! Are there ever wasted tears? I think sometimes they cleanse the soul! There must be prophetic knowledge inside that little green guy. Who says it is not easy being green? :) Loved this one. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tom

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lydia!
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Gee
Gotta say the frog would give Marty Feldman a run for his money with those eyes.
Enjoyed the read, just going to untangle my tongue:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tom

1 Year Ago

A belated thanks Gee
How long did it take you to find the logical words for the rhyme scheme in this poem! Am amazed. That said, it has both a delightful feel and interesting background. Learning newness is never a crime. Thanks lots, Tom.. Take care, keep smiling.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

1 Year Ago

And thank you poet friend for your encouraging review!
emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

Sending a smile :)

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