I am of the opinion that death, especially when it comes in old/older age, is a natural event to be expected & accepted & even celebrated. This feels like a celebration song & I especially love the way it incorporates a way for the buried person to continue speaking to the alive loved one thru blooms and other seasonal changes. I'm all for planting trees in memoriam (or in this case, being buried under a favorite tree), so our loves live on.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you my friend for your understanding and insightful review, and indeed, I wholeheartedly concu.. read moreThank you my friend for your understanding and insightful review, and indeed, I wholeheartedly concur with your sentiments !
This brought a few tears to my eyes. This is very beautiful and written with so much love. It is my wish to be buried next to a tree. We have designated areas for that very reason here. Thank you for sharing, Tom.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
And thank you Dara for your complimentary review !
the kind of love meant for heaven .. very nice .. i am so glad i am here to read this one .. so thank you for the reminder to appreciate every single moment .. ;)
E.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Yes you got it E. & thanks for stopping by, ps Beautiful looking pooch you have there !
she is the beauty in the eye ;) .. and i see you may have a couple of squirmies yourself .. to cover.. read moreshe is the beauty in the eye ;) .. and i see you may have a couple of squirmies yourself .. to cover your lap .. :)) good dogs are good dogs .. no denying .. and they are not common are they? ;)
Wow! New concept for Tom. lol. I am used to your Cricket and animal- inspired poems. But one thing in common is there's always a lesson in your poem, even it is as simple and short as this.
I believe in eternal love.
Amazing in two verses!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you Dhaye and yes, something different from me than the usual !!
Oh...this is just so beautiful Tom. In these lines I find a promise of eternal life and a hope that love never dies. Especially endearing as I too have always tell my little son to not put me away in a cold, distant cemetry but under a tree in his own backyard where he could come and speak to me every evening. Oh I loved this poem Tom!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Yes indeed Divya, you have grasped my poem's raison d' etre exactly as it is meant and thank you for.. read moreYes indeed Divya, you have grasped my poem's raison d' etre exactly as it is meant and thank you for your praising review !
9 Years Ago
Reading this was a pleasure. Thanks for sharing and you are welcome Tom :)
Gordon bloomin Bennett Tom, you just sent shivers down my spine, several of em actually. There's a whole lotta love crammed into these two verses, you versatile old dark horse you...N
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
One does try Neville & thanks again good Sir !
9 Years Ago
You don't need to Tom, you cracked it and gonna bowl em all for six