Early to bed early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise !
An early rise with the lark at dawn, to greet a rapturous, fine summer morn, leaving behind my humble abode, through fields of lavender, I eagerly strode as I raised my head and gazed aloft, to view a sky of blue behind clouds, cotton soft, I closed my eyes and inhaled deep, vitality filled my lungs, while others sleep!
Pleasant aromas then infused, with the lark's shrill song, my senses enthused, erasing each and every folly e'er I knew, all rendered hence a pleasing adieu! 'Twas then my reason to wonder why, grown men in slumber, prostrate lie and never rise with the lark at dawn, nor hear its shrill, invigorating, song?
Continuing on my pleasurable, pilgrimage, exulted by harmony and redolent fragrance to a venue of noted esteem and worthy merit, where a game is played with fortifying spirit, outside, within an open and hallowed ground, leather on willow, another summer, sultry sound And on arrival to sojourn for the day, I took my seat just as an eminent voice called out;" Play"!
The pleasure of an invigorating early morning walk is echoed in the rhythm of this poem, and so many of your "end rhymes" were a delight. I can only hope that the match was being played on a village green, however, as queuing up for a ticket and sitting in a stadium does detract from your rural image .lol.
Loved it, nevertheless, Tom.
Norman
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Yes indeed Norman, the match was at a quintessential village green and thank you for your perceptive.. read moreYes indeed Norman, the match was at a quintessential village green and thank you for your perceptive review !
Your love of the game is contagious, Tom. I'm sure you are a very pleasant person to be around - your joyful spirit enlivens your words. Beautifully done! Merry Christmas, my friend!
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Thank you Joyce for your thoughtful words &a very Merry Xmas to you !
No better way to begin the day than just before the sun rises. The air is fresher, the sky awakens with pinks, blues, and golds, and deep inside you know you are going to have a great day! The imagery you served up here is spectacular. You allowed us to travel with you along your path and touched on all the senses. Tom, this is a winner! Lydi**
Tom you wrote a noble poem of a man whom holds the dearness of love:) Love for what is in life , Love to embrace the shames of darkness, To give his hand to only her:) A noble knight is what I see!
"Invigorating", comes to mind as I read this.... an exhilarating chime...
Some mornings are made of these magical enchantments..... when all is quite but the Lark, singing his bird song...