L. O. V. E.

An acrostic challenge set by Great Aunt Astri, the word love being the header letters!

Linger not, or choose to ignore

One that needs a helping hand

Venerated will be and more

Every one who helps their brother from the sinking sand!

Reviews

[Blue]

I tried writing acrostics but I never found them to be easy. :(

I agree with your sentiments here, Tom. I believe love is best shown by helping others in need. "venerated" is a really apt word and I admire you for having chosen that to describe someone who shows a noble deed of love, no matter how simple.

Looking forward to reading more poems of yours, Tom. I visit your profile every now and then but you haven't written new ones as of late. That's why I keep digging your old ones. ;) Have a great day ahead!

[Tom]

Thank you indeed Blue for your as ever, astute and quite charming analysis !

[Sami Khalil]

I don't just like the acrostic , I like the ideas too...Bravo

[Tom]

Thank you indeed Sami !

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...:)..................

[AYVID N]

Noble thoughts coming wrapped in just the right words by a lovely, poetic soul. An acrostic that embodies love in ways superior to conventional romantic love. So I say, best acrostic ever! Thanks Tom...

[Tom]

Thank you Divya for such a tremendous review !

[Relic]

I like the religious tone of this. There is wisdom within your words. Nice poem Tom.

[Tom]

Thank you Relic !

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A true, wonderful philosophy encapsulated in four great lines! Bravo!

[Tom]

Thank you Gleb !

[Gleb Zavlanov]

You are welcome.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW! I love this...especially the last line...
Heartfelt words, my sweet friend!~xoxo~:)

[Tom]

Thank you Robbie for your kind words !

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love this.~xoxo~:D
(I gotta try acrostic...it seems to be a fun challenge)

[Tom]

It is fun Robbie but its more tricky than it looks, good luck !

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Thank you... I'll need it. lol :D

[gabrielle]

there are so many faces of love and you concisely written one aspect of love in here. short and meaningful.

[Tom]

Thank you once more gabrielle !

[Rita L. Sev]

The essence of love in a well crafted acrostic - well done, Tom!

[Tom]

Thank you Rita !

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I went back to GAA's challenge and copied my version there. Here's mine, Tom:

L etting one's heart feel
O h such a magical feeling
V alue each others' acts
E nough to say that you really love...


I love your version, Tom. Brotherly love...helping hand...respected. Nice idea.

[Tom]

Thanks dhaye, yes I like your version it is very compassionate and well scribed, at first I thought GAA challenge was to simple task but it actually is quite a tricky little thing to write!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

That's right, Tom. You're welcome.

[icelandicblue]

A rhyming acrostic filled with words of kindness and love! Great job Sheila!!

[Tom]

Now now ice 'blue are you on the beer early ? I'm Tom not Sheila although I agree, she is indeed a lovely lady poetess!!

[icelandicblue]

Ha ha- sorry about that Tom! Great poem TOM!

[Tom]

My thanks to you as always icey'blue !!

[Lydia Shutter]

To help a friend out of the quicksand of life...indeed, that is love. Great acrostic. Lydi**

[Tom]

Thank you Lydia !