Can you guess what pet I am ?

Can you guess what pet I am ?

A Poem by Tom
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She's just one of six !

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I’m black & white an adored family pet, can you guess what I am?

A killer whale? An unlikely tale! 

A friesian cow? I can’t see how!

A zebra braying? What are you saying? 

A piebald pony? You’re a phony!

A panda bear? Well I do declare! 

A stinky skunk? You must be drunk!

A speckled hen? Try again! 

A feathered magpie? Although I try, I can’t fly!

A little clown-fish? Not my dish! 

A pet rat or cat? I’ll have none of that!

And don’t say giant ant-eater, goat, stoat, 

lemur, rabbit, pig, penguin or warty tree frog!

My name’s Tilly, sometimes a silly-billy 

and I’m a cute little Shi-tzu dog!

© 2013 Tom


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What a delightful poem, Tom! Among all those other black and white creatures, the pup is the one who will be there waiting anxiously for your return at night, maybe even bringing you your slippers. Loved the rhyme scheme, too, it helped make the poem smile.

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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Joyce for such a nice review !



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This is too cute Tom, I miss my little pooch Luna, so this made my day, great rhyming scheme, enjoyed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda !
Awww, I was gonna guess giant ant-eater, Tom! Ha! Bless you for having six. I have two fur babies that keep me quite busy. I couldn't imagine life without them, though. Cute, cute Poem! Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Angi!
This is adorable, Tom!!
My own little Shih Tzu would enthusiastically agree....

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Angel!
Oh Tilly sounds absolutely adorable, and even though a "sometimes silly-billy" a cherished part of your family!! I know my dogs are/have been a major part of my family!!!
As a dog lover, you could not please me more with a write as this!! I also liked hearing of all the other critters which reminds me of how diverse our animal and bird and amphibian, and, and, and, are!!!
A delightful read in wonderful rhyme!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thanks Shiela, yes all the other critters are or can be black/white in colour, but Tilly had to keep.. read more
Sheila Kline

11 Years Ago

Oh, now I can see your precious babies.........I count 4 of them in the picture! What a delightful .. read more
Awwee I have two black and white dogs, both mutts:) cute poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Emmy!
Ahh sweet the dog across the street is black and white and her name is Moo. I love your poem and your love for your pooches.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you ice'blue, she is a character !
Tom, this is absolutely adorable! No, I didn't think you would tolerate a skunk in your presence and a cow, well, that would be too much work. A little Shi-tzu seems perfect for you...and the rhyming in this poem is perfect too! Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia, while she was sleeping on my lap the inspiration just came to me !
very cute poem....and probably a very adorable dog it is written about.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob, yes she sure is !

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