Can you guess what pet I am ?

Can you guess what pet I am ?

A Poem by Tom
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She's just one of six !

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I’m black & white an adored family pet, can you guess what I am?

A killer whale? An unlikely tale! 

A friesian cow? I can’t see how!

A zebra braying? What are you saying? 

A piebald pony? You’re a phony!

A panda bear? Well I do declare! 

A stinky skunk? You must be drunk!

A speckled hen? Try again! 

A feathered magpie? Although I try, I can’t fly!

A little clown-fish? Not my dish! 

A pet rat or cat? I’ll have none of that!

And don’t say giant ant-eater, goat, stoat, 

lemur, rabbit, pig, penguin or warty tree frog!

My name’s Tilly, sometimes a silly-billy 

and I’m a cute little Shi-tzu dog!

© 2013 Tom


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What a delightful poem, Tom! Among all those other black and white creatures, the pup is the one who will be there waiting anxiously for your return at night, maybe even bringing you your slippers. Loved the rhyme scheme, too, it helped make the poem smile.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Joyce for such a nice review !



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:) This poem made me smile, Tom! Clever incorporation of so many black & white animals, great rhythm ans rhyme - this would make a fun picture-book poem for kids!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rita, yes indeed that's an idea !
Good one Tom. I never thought about how many animals were back and white before. You put this together perfectly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Relic, yes indeed there are quite a few black/white animals and I'm sure I have far from n.. read more
It must be so adorable...I can just imagine...never seen one.
You are lucky to have it.
A very delightful read!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Divya, do they not have the shi-tzu breed where you come from ?
I love dogs especially the small ones like Shi-tzu for I have a rat terrier...You have penned a cute and lovable poem like them...Bravo
Beware that you can't feed them chocolate for they get really sick...:)......

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are so right...Welcome...:)..........
Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you both, yes indeed all dogs are awesome and you are quite correct Sami, chocolate is not nou.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Hahaha...So true...:).........
Shi-tzus are just about the cutest little dogs in the world...my neighbor has two...

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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Marie, they are indeed infectious we craters !!
OMG!! I love it. So cute. I was going to guess a dalmatian, but Shi-tzu is way better. I have a puppy that is part shi-tzu.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Hinote, shi-tzus are indeed cute and fun, though all dogs full, cross-breed or just plain .. read more
I didn't realise there were so many black and white animals. The poem is lovely and very witty

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Great Aunt Astri, neither did I and I'm sure there are a few more I missed out on ?
Such a sweet tale! It's nice to get a break from all the "heavy" sometimes and just look through a window into someones life and see the joy of a family pet filled with absolute love, and surrounded by adoration. Bravo to you, my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Girl Friday !
Cool! This is cool. Tom. Haha! I am guessing while reading each line just to find the answer in the end. I love dogs of any breed. A Shi-tzu is really cute.
Enjoyable. Great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you dhaye-namic !
This is a fun piece to read, Tom... refreshing riddle!
Every pet holds something endearing that we adore about them.. and I know you cherish yours...
Adorable write!~xoxo~:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you Robbie !
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

It's always a pleasure to read your work, Tom.~xoxo~:)

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