Jeepers Creepers !

Jeepers Creepers !

A Poem by Tom
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My entry for the Halloween contest...

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Halloween is drawing near, I hope it’s not as terrifying as last year!

So many ghosts & ghouls came to my door, trick or treat their implore!


First Frankenstein tall and green, I felt sorry for him know what I mean?

Next Dracula scenting blood, but he’s just an amorous old stud!


A werewolf knocked awful hairy, I just smiled, he's not that scary!

Then a mummy wrapped in linen, from ear to ear had me grinning!


A zombie pretending to be dead, did not fill me full of dread!

along with several ghosts in white, had me chuckling an amusing sight!


The invisible man made me grin, I easily saw straight through him!

To each and every one I gave a treat, even a ghoul likes a sweet!


My final visitor a wicked witch, I laughed so much, I took a stitch!

Then she pulled off her mask and I got the fright of my life, Jeepers Creepers it was the wife!

© 2013 Tom


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Hahahaha! Love this very humourous write, dear Tom. Love how you found none of the usual ghouls scary until your last visitor showed up! What an amazing twist at the end! Very nicely done! Admiration for your poetic skills, Tom. I feel dear Mrs. Tom has an equally wonderful sense of humour as you have and saw the funny side immediately, bless you both. My Mr. Tom would fail to grasp the delightfully funny side if I wrote it about him. He's recovering from a dislocated shoulder at the moment, so I will spare him this year, but who knows what next year will bring. He might have a surprise too! Wonderful little gem, Tom. Love it and thank you for sharing, my friend...

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks as always Marie and thrilled you gotta a chuckle out of this one, and best regards to your hu.. read more
Marie

4 Weeks Ago

Most welcome always, dear Tom and thank you for your kind wishes to Tom. Hope he mends up well too!!.. read more



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Haha! Great one Tom - you got all the monsters in, and the scariest of all is the one who knows you best! LOL! :) Enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rita, it was good fun thinking about all those monsters once more, though Mrs Tom isn't that .. read more
A very good poem. You had it all. Jeepers creeper is my favorite scary movie. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Coyote, its hard to beat a good scare !
Oh Tom, you are in trouble now! It is a perfectly fun poem to read. You've captured the gamut of costumes that will be knocking on your door again soon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

11 Years Ago

Thank you icey blue, no its ok my wife laughed along too, but your concern is much appreciated!

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