Haven of love- A collaboration with Danny

Just a poem Danny and I made to help me get over my writer's block. Thank you, Danny!

There's some wine and bread left
A candle to lit dreams while you rest
Take the bed, you need it more
Don't worry, I'll sleep on the floor
Just wish me a good night
Tomorrow everything will be alright

Your wounds will heal in time
Our scars will resemble the fight
We went through in this life
You're not alone anymore
For you are the one I adore

Reviews

[Bear]

Getting two minds to come together with one understanding may be the hardest thing a writer can ever do. Getting two pens to write the same words with the same meanings is a monumental event so I applaud your accomplishment. To work with another and turn out a work of literature like this deserves a Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap!

[Tomoe Tellez]

Thanks a lot for reading!

[Insight "MH"]

Lovely and touching thank you both for making this nicely done write.

Insight.

[Tomoe Tellez]

Thanks! :D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It's cute :)
thanks for posting :)

[Tomoe Tellez]

You're welcome, thank you!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Never a problem :)

[nightshade]

This was cute and short. I really love all the emotion that you have put into this poem.