What others see, what I see, what you see

What matters is how we see life

You see my mother

I know a warrior

She never gives up

Always so strong

 

You see my father

I know a hero

He fights with honor

Wish I could mirror

 

You see my brother

I know a soldier

Searching for the truth

Hates how injustices rule

 

You see my grandmother

I know a queen

With kindness she reigns

And loves all the children

 

You see my grandfather

I know a king

Who protects his family

From any danger

 

You see a girl

I know I am a writer

What others see

Doesn't matter

 

As long as you believe

You will have magic

Author's Note

I hope you like it. What do you think?

Reviews

[Ashley Lytle]

I really love this. It is something I think others can connect with and I love this idea you are looking at with this poem. The idea where you talk about how others view people and then how you view people. This poem really made me think about that in my own life.

[Tomoe Tellez]

I'm glad it did! :D Thank you for your kind words.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Lovely poem! We all idolize someone or the other in our own family, fir they are people we have grown up seeing and countless times they have inspired us to be a better version of ourselves.
Beautiful! Loved the sweet write.

[Writer99]

Cool poem loved the one before last verse , im baaaaaack 😏

[Tomoe Tellez]

Thanks a lot for the compliment!

[Sally Hope]

Empowerment, and a beautiful vision towards life, Alondra. Loved reading this. Keep up the good work :)

[Tomoe Tellez]

Life isn't perfect, but the way we see it, changes everything. Thanks for reading it, I'm glad you loved it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Now this is something i like.
No big words,
just comparing viewpoints with your own. awesome work.
100 points

[Tomoe Tellez]

Thank you very much :D!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

no problem :)

[Eliot Knight]

Reminds me of Once Upon a Time, a family of gallant heroes with a writer for a daughter. Though not in the spotlight, your role is just as vital.

[Tomoe Tellez]

Hey, thanks for the nice words and for reading.

[David Jae]

Very evocative and full of emotion. Family is everything.

[Tomoe Tellez]

Thank you very much!

[Terry O'Leary]

An interesting sequence... with a pow! ending... very nice!!!

[Tomoe Tellez]

Thanks a lot for your words! :)

[Insight "MH"]

I love how proud you showed us of those closest to you in a beautifully written poem.

[Tomoe Tellez]

Yeah, a had been planning to write my feelings about them from a long time ago, I just hadn't found the words I could say that would match up with the feeling. Thanks for reading!

[Insight "MH"]

You are mostly welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the story of the important people in your life. I tell people. Never rate another life. Don't know their journey. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tomoe Tellez]

Thank you a lot for reading! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.