The title of the poem is so apt. These truly are words, I'm sure, many will need (My personal favourite is: "Sometimes it's too late to ask for forgiveness; But it's never too late for revenge" :)) A great read, and a really good write. Thanks for sharing.
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9 Years Ago
That quote seems to be the favorite of most, there's some really dark writers here, lol :D! Thanks f.. read moreThat quote seems to be the favorite of most, there's some really dark writers here, lol :D! Thanks for reading!
The title of the poem is so apt. These truly are words, I'm sure, many will need (My personal favourite is: "Sometimes it's too late to ask for forgiveness; But it's never too late for revenge" :)) A great read, and a really good write. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
That quote seems to be the favorite of most, there's some really dark writers here, lol :D! Thanks f.. read moreThat quote seems to be the favorite of most, there's some really dark writers here, lol :D! Thanks for reading!
Well, before i get to it, i must mention the rating... 100 points, cuz the write is awesome! These quotes actually got me right on the spot. First of all, lets go with number one... Something like the issue with the "cool kids" in school. You're never good enough for them, but they're always more than good enough to everyone else. Atleast, that is what we see.
Moving on, to the one written with green. Some words are stronger than others, you give them the volume. True, in more ways than one. Very well done.
'The darker the sky
The more stars you'll see
And the brighter they will be'
This quote is so powerful. The life of some persons may reside in the darkness, bathing in the sadness of their tears but if you strengthen your heart and open your heart to hope, for one must never lean on darkness because as long as hope remains in your heart, the lingering darkness shall become afraid of your light (resolve) and one shall shine brighter than the other starts have ever shined. You have talent and your quotes are so awesome and inspiring.
Good job :D
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9 Years Ago
Oh my gosh! Thank you very much for you kind words! :)
Some words are stronger than others
You give them the volume
You give them the power
This is a powerful quote. Words have more effect than people realize they can be used for building up or tearing down. Either way way words must be chosen carefully as they have much power. Really good read.
They're all quite good and I just had a wicked idea... you could start a contest and ask people to choose one of them as writing prompt. Would be interesting to see what different writers would come up with... :-)
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9 Years Ago
Hey, that sounds great! I had no intention of doing any contest, but if you don't mind I'll take you.. read moreHey, that sounds great! I had no intention of doing any contest, but if you don't mind I'll take your idea and do it.
Thanks a lot for reviewing! :D
9 Years Ago
haha, by all means, go ahead! I might submit a story or two of my own if you don't mind!
"That messed up feeling when you cant be enough for someone and that person is more than enough for many".
This one is my favourite :)
Very well done.
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9 Years Ago
Thanks! I wrote it because of my parents. I feel like I will always be under their shadow, they seem.. read moreThanks! I wrote it because of my parents. I feel like I will always be under their shadow, they seem so great, kind and amazing to me, and I just feel like a horrible human being and so tiny.
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Haha well no, you are not right feeling this. Its for the time being that you are under their shadow.. read moreHaha well no, you are not right feeling this. Its for the time being that you are under their shadow, you'll be independent very soon, and i believe that you'd rock then :) :'D
I’ve always written stories of magical realms, but my fear didn’t let me share anything I wrote. I searched for this website in order to find out if I have any talent at all or if I&rsquo.. more..