You Used To Be
A Poem by
Tomi
There’s
a book of sad stories where my heart used to be
Music, art, love, hate and who we used to be
There’s a space in history where we used to be
Too bad, you forgot the person you used to be
© 2013 Tomi
Reviews
At first I was a bit thrown with the four line rhyme with the infinitive. But the more I read this, the more I like it.Nice write
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank You :)
a lot said in four lines :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
a lot said in four lines :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
It is sad when we forget who we were. We become empty shells with with no purpose. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
It is sad when we forget who we were. We become empty shells with with no purpose. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
Stunning work,Tomi
Posted 11 Years Ago
Stunning work,Tomi
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
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Added on February 3, 2013
Last Updated on February 3, 2013
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Tomi Nigeria
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I'm afraid of two things; fear and the illusion of who i might be. I write to escape. Proudly Nigerian.
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