SSENEVIGROF

SSENEVIGROF

A Poem by Tomi

They’d pull off their clothes; sex sells

Hormones, beauty and sex cells

Why can’t I drift away from the lusting?

And all the other things I’m lost in

Who do I serve, what do I trust in

Why so much pain from those I’ve been trusting

If this is a blessing; tell me what a curse is

I went from saying Amen to raining down curses

But the truth about knowing God is

You may never know love until you know who God is

 

© 2012 Tomi


Author's Note

Tomi
A poem about a struggling Believer and forgiveness..A bit cryptic buh....

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Some battle are for a lifetime. Good and bad will test us to the end. I was a Soldier and single for 15 years. I like the edge. Most of us when we are young. Hard to worship god and walk a straight line. Thank you for the excellent poetry. Made my old mind think.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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hmm.. a very reflective piece... your heart is so genuine and I am grateful for that.. we can all be made of love though, there is nothing stopping us from that but ourselves.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good poem, but I don`t agree with the last line. Atheists and Agnostics can fall in love too !

Posted 11 Years Ago


you just captured a moment in everybody's lives when these questions are asked
"If this is a blessing; tell me what a curse is"

You Are Goood! Write On Mate!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some battle are for a lifetime. Good and bad will test us to the end. I was a Soldier and single for 15 years. I like the edge. Most of us when we are young. Hard to worship god and walk a straight line. Thank you for the excellent poetry. Made my old mind think.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tomi
Tomi

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