Random But Important Ramblings

Random But Important Ramblings

A Poem by Tomi

Trust not all words of men; search what’s in their hearts

Flattery is an art of ages: Most people are excellent at it

Live like there’s a tomorrow; hope keeps you strong

Life is not short: it goes by quickly

If wishes were horses; if gold was sand

If time were reversible; I’d hold your hand

 

Kids: tomorrow’s leaders? I laugh

Who are we kidding, not with our leaders?

Leaders of tomorrow; tomorrow already passed

Now is tomorrow, now is the future

Teach a child to lead now; so when he’s a man, he’d already be a Man

 

© 2012 Tomi


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Are u advocating that only males be prepared for leadership whilst they are children?

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tomi

11 Years Ago

No, I mean "man" as a being.. A HuMAN Being: Male and Female..Being a man in the context also means.. read more
Love the second part... couldn't have said it better. Not too random I don't think, it works. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Great write-up

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
I like the rhythm to this, not very random. Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank You :)
This is wonderful... True talk: teach a child to be a man now, now is the time... Tomorrow may be too late. Nicely penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank You :)
Very astute for rambling thoughts..! Great write, Tomi.
*pat

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very thought provoking, nice job the structure is interesting as well

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thanks
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

My pleasure
Very well written, love the punctuation that is really professional - so a great tempo, and the phrases are broken up really well - fine job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
wow... you are so inspiring.. and I'm sorry if that's flattery! but seriously.... your ideologies have the power to change the world... and they are not random thoughts at all.... I would carry your words with me to remind me of what's important in life always. Thank you for this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you.. you're kind..Glad this inspired you! :) God bless...
Circe

11 Years Ago

and blessings to you :)
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I love it ,Tomi. Very organic and thought provoking

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tomi

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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