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Crystabel and Elf - Part 3

Crystabel and Elf - Part 3

A Poem by Tom Benson
"

Crys introduces some friends at a party ...

"

Elf heaped praise upon her,

Crys' made him feel blessed.

A party in his honour,

'Elfmac … our special guest …'


Refreshments had been made,

and many secret foods.

On taste buds they all played,

from salads thro' to pud's.


Crys' ensured Elf met,

lots of forest friends.

Like well dressed Little Bet,

who followed woodland trends.


He met too Tricksybel,

a dark haired sultry chic.

Beneath her gaze a spell,

made Elfmac think they'd click …


'Be careful,' then Crys' said,

'this young one's Nymphette,

Her charms will turn your head,

but tempted, please don't get …'


'And here is Tinkerbell,

our famous movie star.

She's pretty you can tell,

it's why she's gone so far.'


So on the intro's went,

each flying girl a stunner.

Elf said, 'Time here well spent,

before I do a runner …'


Everywhere he gazed,

a beauty looked right back.

The few guys seemed not phazed,

in fact they were laid back.


Each petal, every leaf,

acted as a seat.

Female beauty past belief,

to any elf, a treat.


Long flowing hair cascading,

wings fluttering behind.

Around this place parading,

blowing Elfmac's mind.


He whispered then to Crys',

'They're all gorgeous, yes it's true.

But when I go I'll miss,

the loveliest one, that's you.'


The compliment then stirred,

something deep inside.

Crystabel's wings blurred,

her blushes hard to hide.


'I have some secret places,

that you I'd like to show.

Away from all these faces,

just the two of us could go …'


Once plucked into the wind,

on an accidental trip.

How could Elf know he'd find,

all needs at fingertip.


Elfmac took the hand,

Crystabel extended.

He liked this fairyland,

returning home … suspended.


* * *


to be continued …

© 2011 Tom Benson


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You have taken my favorite topic...writing about faeries and magik and turned it into your adult version of faerie land lust and love...Very well done my friend

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Tom Benson
Tom Benson

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