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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Call of the Wild

Call of the Wild

A Poem by Tom Benson
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Daydreaming whilst relaxing after work ....

"


Home again from work I sit,

upon the couch, relaxing.

My energy has dropped a bit,

a hard day's work, quite taxing.


I close my eyes and dream,

to find another world.

In a coat of spots and cream,

on grass I'm stretched, unfurled.


As a cheetah I'm reborn,

athletic, sure and swift.

I'm alone but not forlorn,

great speed is my true gift.


When pangs of hunger strike,

I stretch and take a walk.

A meal I know I'd like,

so prey I'll have to stalk.


The Serengeti sun,

beats down across the land.

A lion pride I shun,

their strength I understand.


Not much later then I see,

and also sense the smell.

Below acacia tree,

alone, a young gazelle.


My belly scrapes the ground,

as now I get in close.

I can't afford a sound,

or scent to reach his nose.


Downwind and moving stealthy,

I'll have to crawl quite near.

This specimen looks healthy,

and agile I now fear.


His big eyes wide and staring,

as nervously he feeds.

Ears pricked up, nostrils flaring,

his wariness he heeds …


I rise and start my run,

he bolts and bounds away.

This chase will not be fun,

and with him I must stay.


He springs into the air,

and changes his direction.

He senses I'm still there,

no trees now, no protection.


I'm sprinting at full speed,

before I use my claws.

His run I then impede,

and next I use my jaws.


Teeth clamped around his neck,

windpipe quickly crushed.

Laid down, held in check,

his panting breath is hushed.


The taste of blood is real,

I hear myself say, 'ouch!'

My bit lip I can feel …

now waking on the couch ….


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© 2011 Tom Benson


Author's Note

Tom Benson
Purely imagination mixed with knowledge of natural history.

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Well done! I dont think I have ever hoped for carnage more in my entire life.
The rhythm and rhyming scheme makes it so easy to read and even more entertaining.
The ending was great, and a wee bit of a shock back into someone else's reality.
Thanks for sharing, and my bad for taking so long to respond to your read request.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Again, in Robert Frost style, you told such a beautiful story with a wonderful ending. Perfection!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh what a powerful dream you had. I was hunting with you as I read, afraid I might have to pull the trigger on a beautiful deer. This flows so well in rhythm and verse; great imagery

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Tom Benson
Tom Benson

Northeast England, United Kingdom



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