Chapter 1: StoriesA Chapter by TomEYou Mr. Yongl
entered the fifth grade classroom via the rear door and politely remained
there. Sunfry Kralisk turned from writing on a board up front to wave a welcome
to him. A few young faces turned his way then back to the vid. Yongl recognized
it, part of the history of Terranule, and partly the reason he was here. A dark
ceiling, rippling like a gentle breeze over a small pool, kept the room at just
the right light for watching the vid. It soon went to credits. Sunfry Kralisk
wiggled her fingers at the ceiling causing it the darkness to roll away from
her, like an ever increasing ripple centered on her, and exposing a pool of
glowfish, obviously enticed there specifically for lighting the room. She wriggled
her fingers are the screen and it starting rippling, breaking up into large
bubbles. Those broking into smaller and smaller ones till they were mist then
the mist evaporated as well.
Sunfry
was looking at her students, one eyebrow arched. She waved her hand toward the
upside down pond again. A large drop of water right over a sleeping student. It
grew and grew until it fell with a splash and the groggy and now soggy boy
bolted to a sitting position, shaking his head and splattering water on his
cringing, giggling neighbors, Mrs. Kralisk exclaimed "Pietl! That's the
third time today. If you can't stay awake in class, stand up by the wall."
Yawning then muttering, he did as he was told.
Mrs.
Kralisk merely looked at him with pity before turning back to her twenty or so
students. "Class, this is Storyteller Ted Yongl." She waved him to
the front. "His latest story is set during the Terranulian history we are
studying, the Terranulian Inmergation. Mr. Yongl is an old friend of mine. When
he mentioned remaining here in Gras Merfin, I begged him to spare half an hour,
once a week share his story about the this most recent addition to our history.
I think you'll enjoy it. Quickly before we start, who can tell me how many
cities Terranule had before this event?" A hand near the front went up.
"Logguc?"
"Yessum.
There were two, Mrs. Kralisk."
"Very
good, Logguc. Have a crunchy goldfish. Now, someone else tell us one of the
names? Karla, tell me one of those cities."
"Rombol,
Mrs. Kralisk."
"Good
job. Here's your crunchy goldfish." The student caught it with a smile on
her face. She popped the little yellow treat into her mouth like it might try
to flop away.
"One
more. Who can name it?" Silence. Students looking around, trying not to be
noticed. These were old names from another place, so it might make sense that
they have trouble remembering them. "Surely you haven't forgotten all
ready. Rombol is easy because it's the capital now. But it wasn't before the
inmergation."
Pietl,
who had been trying to find a way to stoop and pretend to be awake spoke up
"It's..."
"Pietl,
I don't know how they do things in your old school, but here students raise
their hand before speaking." Pietl did so. "Very good."
"Thank
you, Mrs. Kralisk." Suppressing a yawn he added "The city's name is
Anappon, Mrs. Kralisk."
"Very
good! I guess you were paying attention after all." She cocked her head to
the side. "Did you have something to add?"
"Yes,
Mrs. Kralisk. I know the name because I'm from Terranopolis. It used to be
Anappon." Covering another yawn he added "Mrs. Kralisk, isn't there
anything to be done for this humidity? It makes me very sleepy."
"I'm
sorry. This is an underwater school and the environment is what it is. I'm sure
your parents knew that when they chose to move here. Still, Perhaps we can get
them and the school nurses together. I'm sure we can find some way to make it
more comfortable for you. Will that be ok?"
"Yes,
ma'am. I'll let them know. Thank you again." He went back to leaning
against the wall.
Sunfry
gestured "All right class, give a nice round of applause for Mr.
Yongl." They all clap. Some looking excited, others bored, but everyone
looking at him now.
"Good
morning. First let me say that I enjoy storytelling. A lot. I especially like
when my audience is studying the history that my story is set in. I think it
gives something extra to the telling. But that could just be me." Yongl
begins slowly pacing the front of the room.
"Our
story begins with some names you are all ready familiar with. It's said that
this event began with Aidurq and Erion gathered all the others who reigned over
this world, as they are wont to do when important changes are to take place.
Erion had just banged his gavel to bring order to the group. Yunyon bellowed
'Do you have to do that every..."
Aidurq
the Sage examined the Brethren. They were not really brethren, just a group
come together that was better than going it alone. The universe was a dangerous
place and self-preservation required either being very strong or having
sufficient numbers gathered. All were in attendance; Erion, Jadeon, Porphox,
Furnfir, Yunyon, Olmer, Shuppor, Aereoble, Roegrin, Porvednor, and of course,
Aidurq. An odd lot, perhaps, but they worked well together. Like himself,
Jadeon, Porphox, Furnfir, and Roegrin prefer to keep moving, never staying in
one place for long. Aidurq understood that well, but not today, not for him.
Today was special. The rest preferred to take things slower, keeping things
simple and rock steady. It's always tough getting everyone together, even when
it concerned adding another to their number.
Jadeon
interrupted his thoughts, complaining in that whiney, high pitched voice.
"Why Even necessary? It's all ready been agreed to. The invitation has
been extended and accepted."
Aereoble
"This has been done so many times now it's almost as mechanical as Olmer's
infernal contraptions." That voice was like distant thunder on a good day.
Today, it was a small storm brewing.
Olmer
hammered right back. "You use them as much as anyone else! Leave over
or..."
Erion
banged the gavel again. Everyone turned that way, including Furnfir. The gavel.
It was a part of Erion every bit as much as Erion was a part of it. A reply
came that was as calm and clear as it was deep. "Olmer's devices are prized
throughout the realm, as much as what comes from any other part of it. Jadeon,
Aereoble. This meeting was requested because Aidurq has something to share. It
appears this will not be like previous invitations. Yunyon, if Furnfir would
maintain that short attention span better it would not be necessary. Furnfir!
Do we have your attention now?"
Furnfir
replied in a voice that seemed to randomly switch from chimes to butterflies to
fresh spring leaves fluttering in the wind. "Yes, yes. Please, get on with
it. Why is this time any different from others."
Roegrin
and Porphox said nothing, being the last two to be invited, Roegrin lacking
even the experience of doing this with a new addition to the group.
Erion
looked the group over once more, ensuring all heads were focused toward the
front, then nodded to Aidurq.
"I've
been to the Life Stream. I..."
"All
have done so. It's common practice to see whether an option will the right
choice or not. Or simply whether to learn what might be learned of future
events. All viewings said this would be as smooth as those before." That
from the pompous and self-important Porvednor. That one had Joined their
prestigious group just before Porphox the Wise. The Great Merchant, a
self-appointed title, was looking more and more like a mistake. If there was
reason for dissent, it was sure to come from there. Still, those merchandizing
skills had really brought everything together and made their group one of the
strongest anywhere. Unfortunately, Porvednor thought it was also his duty to
remind everyone of it.
"True,
but this time is different. This time it's my Son. When I peered in the first
time, I thought I caught something odd. It nagged at me till I went back for
another viewing." Aidurq paused, frowning to dare anyone to interrupt
again. None did. It was rare for the Life Stream to give differentiating
viewings. When used, it allows the viewer to see a limited amount of anything
and everything that connects to the viewer, including a very limited link with
family. "This time the Life Stream testified to disaster should more than
one be sent to help prepare the way. I could gather no more. I asked my progeny
to check again as well. That viewing concurs with this one. His plans will
alter as well. We can only do is what I've said. Send one. Other than that it's
do what can be done here, and pray."
When
Aidurq finished speaking, the group remained silent. Even Furnfir appeared to
be deep in thought rather than chasing off after some butterfly or a rabbit or
talking to a tree. I never understand why plants and animals should be more
important than sentient beings. The silence did not last long. Despite all the
differences in the world, the members of this group knew how to work together
and do so well. They set to deciding who would go and how that one would do
what needed doing. There wasn't much that could be done. It was all up to the
Invitee, according the Life Stream. One could not do much. Little more than
provide a guide. Aidurq hoped that would be enough.
The young
man was walking along a tiny trail through the Forest of Painted Trees. It got
the name from how the trees leaves varied in color, even during the greenest
spring. It was beautiful. More beautiful than he ever remembered. Animals
scampered here and there and birds chittered and sang. The world was at peace.
He came
to a fork in the road. The young man turned to the road on the right. It soon
led to a world full of strange sights; mountains that looked like buildings,
giant birds, all manner of flying things - including land large enough for a
large city with more of those strange buildings on it, giant things floating in
the ocean, men that swam like fish. It was nothing like the world he
remembered. It was all very strange and very scary. Somewhere in the back of his
mind he wondered how he could see all that at once. Right in front of all that,
growing to block his view of that strange vista, was the largest Living Oak he
had ever seen, almost shining in its brilliance. It was as if it were waiting
for him, waiting for something, almost calling to him. but why? What could he
supposed to do? What could he do?
The young
man returned to the fork in the road and went down the left path. This road
quickly ended with a world in chaos. Storms like he'd never seen with whipping
wind and rain, cloud funnels that came out of the sky to carry away homes,
people, livestock, and even trees, all except the ancient Living Oaks. The sea
rose up like a giant hand had slapped it, forcing a high wall of water to wash
far inland, carrying everything its path along with it and then back out to
sea. The earth rose up and tumbled back on itself. Villages, towns, cities
forests and everything that was left was buried under the earth like seeds for
plowing.
The young
man feared taking either path. He attempted to turn back to the tranquil
forest...only, the way back was dark. It was completely black. No candles, no
stars, no shadowy shapes of any kind. Just blackness. Just nothing? It was as
if the place he came from had never been. And that darkness was getting closer.
There was no going back. © 2012 TomEYou |
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Added on October 5, 2012 Last Updated on October 5, 2012 AuthorTomEYouDenton, TXAboutWriting my first story with what I think is a unique world design. Aristotle: The whole is greater than the sum of its parts. more..Writing
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