Low Horizons, Big Changes

A key aspect of this world is how small it is. I'm thinking to keep this obscure, perhaps with small hints to the actual size, until I bring in a char from another realm who starts complaining it. That way, it will become clear how things are different but not why until much later. I'm bringing him in chapter 5, I think. I'm wondering if that's waiting too long.

As for char depth, being proactive, and making them sympathetic are my weak spots I think. I'm working on that for now my main goal is to finish the first draft.