Prologue: What Bragging Can Do.A Chapter by TomEYouWanted only one pov. Fear key elements are missing n wasn't sure how to add them till later. Wrote a prologue to address them. I think I can them to ch2, now, but thought to share anyway.The King's Surveyor/Cartographer/StarMapper sat in his office, a small, windowless room, only twenty feet square and 10 feet high with no windows. The room was not really small except by palace standards. It was as a large as the den in his home on Kremp Way, one of the nicer neighborhoods in Celestaerion, the Sky City, the Capital of Aidurq Erion. It was the only city in the sky, that being a major accomplishment. It was also called The City of Glorin, for now. It was renamed when King Glorin took over from King Yulit three and a half years earlier, who renamed it after himself before that. All Kings do so when it's their turn to rule over all of Aidurq Erion. King Fronkor of the Frost Elves was due to take over for another five years. Idly, Mali noted how the chosen number of years linked with the number of lesser deities. It
was also the number of known planets. He could see some of those planets. They
became small, oddly colored balls when viewed through his faroptical. Larger
ones could see more detail of course, but he did not have to share his, even if
was only two feet in length. He kept it on the roof of his four story home. If
was not a mansion, having been built higher than it was wide, but it provided
plenty of room for his wife and four children. He
felt the overhead fan start up again. A feathered, rainbow-colored fan that
lazily stirred the air. It seemed to hang there in the air, a trick of
mechnology. Bookcases decorated much of the walls to either side of his desk.
More existed beyond those, another trick of mechnology to make better use of
space. They contained books of all sorts with a few knick-knacks for bookends.
Most were on mapping terrain, both on the surface and deep inside the earth.
Some even speculated mapping air and water currents like they were the stable
earth. Some he wrote himself. A few were his favorite stories. His
desk was large, necessary for drawing his maps and comparing different types.
It is currently cluttered with maps, paperweights, a forgotten health drink his
wife insisted he bring to the office, pictures of his family playing out a
short history of their lives at some point or another. The desk faced the door,
which was sandwiched between yet more bookcases. Above everything there were
shelves containing all sorts of knick-knacks and artifacts, including
geological rocks, bones of various animals, old map scrolls stuffed away and
forgotten. The
slim man, slim even for his people, sat in a chair behind the desk, staring at
the wall behind him like he was trying to plot out every detail. There was a
painting of white, tulip-shaped clouds in the sky. One was a highly realistic
imaging of his family in a glass frame, taken with lenses and that
photoelectric paper that was all the rage. He had a smaller one of just his
wife on his desk. maps and paintings. He
had the most accurate maps of both stars and terrain in all of Aidurq Erion. He
could touch any part of the terrain map and make it move in for a closer view,
close enough to see the grass on his lawn if he wished. He loved almost mapping
as much as marking the stars on his personal sky chart at home. He was a
surveyor/cartographer, not an astronomer. Still, he performed that task when
asked. It was he who came up with the idea for translating terrain onto maps,
some 347 years ago. He was quite proud of that. He knew more about mapping than
anyone. He often bragged that he could map a world without the use of glass
lenses better than anyone else could using the best tools. Right
now he just, his back to his desk, and the door. He was examining that terrain
map, using it to look in on his family. Now he was thinking he should have kept
his mouth shut. Thinking about what he had to do made his mouth dry, his tongue
almost scraping across his teeth, like he was chewing on one of his boots.
Perhaps he was. He wanted to laugh. He had really put his foot in his mouth
this time, didn't he? boots and all. Earlier
today one of Aidurq's High Priests came. He had said "Your claim to map a
world quickly and without your usually technology is well known. Now you will
get the chance to prove it. Aidurq is sending you to Shurm. You will map the
entire land with one year's time. Aidurq will not send anything with you this
time." "No
Tech? And I'm supposed to do this in one year?" How small is this place?
"Please, I beg of you, intercede on my behalf to send my Pocket
Carto'granomical, too." Turning
to go, the High Priest, slimmer even than he was, merely said. "His
attention is needed elsewhere." He
wanted to argue, discuss, beg on his knees if necessary, but as he followed the
priest out the door, the man was gone. Last
week word went throughout the land that Shurm had accepted Aidurq Erion's
invitation. Shurm was a deity of some tiny, backwater realm that was more like
a moon with grass. He had moved his meager followers there, taking the place
for his own, barely six hundred years earlier, His followers were humans, quick
tempered and short-lived with memories even shorter. The name Shurm tickled
some long forgotten memory. The distraught man had no time for it. Shurm
barely had any magic, no technology to speak of, and barely any metal or wood
working capabilities. More specifically, no glass! That was why they came to
his office, because he bragged he could do it with no tech. Of course, he never
meant with no glass! Oh, comets and meteors! Why did he have to say those
things all the time? The
slim man looked about his office for perhaps the twelfth time. He tried to
resolve himself to his fate. Out loud he spoke to the map "There is
nothing else to do but go through with it." He went back to staring at his
family house in his terrain map. It was all ready dark when he made it home to
tell his wife and family. © 2012 TomEYouAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorTomEYouDenton, TXAboutWriting my first story with what I think is a unique world design. Aristotle: The whole is greater than the sum of its parts. more..Writing
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