On the Brink

A Poem by Shannon.

Tired.

Eyes burning,

vision fades away...

Wait!

Finish the chapter!

Where was I?

Oh yeah.

Eyelids droop,

head falls...

No!

Have to finish!

Where was I?

Oh yeah.

One paragraph,

two,

three,

What?

I read the same paragraph three times?!

Forget it, I'm going to bed.

Good night.

Author's Note

Just something I wrote before going to bed.

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....no offense....but.....WTF!??!
Sorry.....a friend's just gotta say.....XP......that was.....ok......
just not the best.........

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Added on February 8, 2009

Meh, I'm just here to read my friend's writing, but I might write some stuff of my own... more..

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