Confusion

Confusion

A Poem by Shannon.
"

I just don't know what to think.

"

I'm so confused.

I can't remember

what he said,

what he did,

what he was like.

I can only remember the feelings

of happiness,

of nervousness,

of tentative love.

I tell myself it was two years ago,

that I don't know him now,

that I don't know what he's like,

that I don't like him.

But when he walks into the room,

my heart flutters,

my skin tingles,

my face heats up.

My brain and body send different signals,

what am I supposed to think?

I'm so confused.

© 2009 Shannon.


Author's Note

Shannon.
Well, this is my first time putting my writing online. :) I've never really let anybody read my poetry other than what I write for school, so just tell me what you think.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

wow...this is done really well, I really connected to your poem especially in the section where you tell yourself it was to years ago, and what that means to you yet the italics for know and like, it works so well for me it means "I know it's over yet deep inside the italikcs still tell me that I like me ex" really captures the moment and definitely found it very meaningful. keep up the good work = )

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

O.o I didn't know that you wrote period.........but that was pretty good. Great for a first poem though!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow...this is done really well, I really connected to your poem especially in the section where you tell yourself it was to years ago, and what that means to you yet the italics for know and like, it works so well for me it means "I know it's over yet deep inside the italikcs still tell me that I like me ex" really captures the moment and definitely found it very meaningful. keep up the good work = )

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem. :) It's interesting how... you describe a possible ex and that maybe, you still have feelings for him, well done here. The use of small phrases kinda gives a breathless feeling when I read it, which, apparently is how you/the speaker of this poem feel when they are around this guy. Great write! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

166 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on February 8, 2009

Author

Shannon.
Shannon.

KY



About
Meh, I'm just here to read my friend's writing, but I might write some stuff of my own... more..

Writing