Stanley Griggs

Stanley Griggs

A Poem by TomboyVisionary
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Just a character I made up will be making more of these

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My world is blurred as it is coherent

Where am I heading?
these leather boots I wear
The sound of my steps in these misty puddles

I am lost and yet I am found
My heart lifted in the atmosphere
My spine riddled with grit and fear

Nonetheless I move forward, even mountains are unclear

© 2024 TomboyVisionary


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i quite enjoy the melancholy feeling your poem gives off, especially with how you describe the world as being blurred and the puddles misty. yet, its so charming how the character seems to push on despite internal and external (?) stressors.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TomboyVisionary

2 Months Ago

That is pretty much the point yeah, thank you for the review =D

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Added on August 19, 2024
Last Updated on August 19, 2024
Tags: #Motivation #characters #Monolog

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TomboyVisionary
TomboyVisionary

Dover, NJ



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I have been to different dimensions so ill write about the good s**t I saw more..

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