My Final Stand

Final Stand

This is my final stand, my last breaths of despair

In these last moments, all of adversity I shall bare

Standing in my own two feet, broken and damned

And yet I stand, every little of hope and grit shall be manned

It is but an after thought what past formed my image

For this day my sorrow, my tears, must puzzle into rage

Now is not the time to be weak

My back against the wall, I am become death, flesh is but reek

No turning back, you have brought upon your own fate

No thinking back, i'm in a survivalist mind state

A heart full of terror, I see the devil in the mirror

No longer trembling in fear, no longer in competition with my peers

No more evil nor good I can hear

I see no hell, I see no heaven, I see only the earth still

Agonized yells full of rasp, fueled desperate rage for will

A hell spawn, a shadow full of hate and pain

Won't see the end of this day, blood, regret, anger in my soul is stained

My last stand, Every fiber of my being are no longer tamed

My last stand, I shall go down in a blaze of flame

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful movement of words and thoughts. I liked the energy and the drive of the words. Our last stand. We must fight to win, we hope? Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[TomboyVisionary]

Ultimate strength arrives when its your only choice. Appreciate the comment coyote! =)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I did enjoy the poetry.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hey, TomyboyVisionary, I always do imagine what is out there besides fear and strength, and your poem is a true visionary. :D ---maynard

[TomboyVisionary]

Its not suppose to be taken seriously though, however I know for a fact that its going to motivate someone out there who does have any choice but to be strong

[TomboyVisionary]

Thank you so much for the comment =)

[1809 Black Plague December]

hellos, TomeboyVisionary, funny, but yes, I still think to think withing bounds and what the possibilities are out there, feelings or thoughts that just can't be coveyed. :D eagerly betaken,