Yeats poems in memory of Major Gregory celebrate him as an Irish airman, though he was a lover of the empire and stood against everything the poor of Kiltartan loved or wanted.
Stanza 2 Line 2--At it was "not" a writers war to fight
Well, I have to disagree; I really liked this poem, which didn't seem at all slung or written in haste! What was taken from Ireland is gone forever and that makes me sad. I love anything Irish, including my O'Men or McMen. LOL!! My current being a very Irish McKee.
tis always a pleasure to read and hear your works Tomas. You bring history to life plucking my ancestral chords
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Cheers Donald - plenty more over on www.writingsinrhyme.com if you want a gander! I'll get a read of.. read moreCheers Donald - plenty more over on www.writingsinrhyme.com if you want a gander! I'll get a read of some of yours later on!
Tomas I am sure you know the previous comment by Lara is a spammer, they come on here & send messages in our inboxes and reviews. Do not message or email. I have reported as spam. You my friend should also do the same! Blessings!!
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I get tons of them! Thanks for the warning anyway! 😅😆😊
Inspirational poem, I love the idea of writing in response (or about) another poem and if it's done well, can be really beautiful. This was, I loved the repetition and the stanza talking about how war isn't fit for a poem, but this hero was. As I said, inspiring. :)
Stanza 2 Line 2--At it was "not" a writers war to fight
Well, I have to disagree; I really liked this poem, which didn't seem at all slung or written in haste! What was taken from Ireland is gone forever and that makes me sad. I love anything Irish, including my O'Men or McMen. LOL!! My current being a very Irish McKee.
That was pretty cool. Slow down a bit o' the reading. Sounds rushed and a wee bit hard to understand at times laddie. Loved the musical number that played along with it. Would have loved a bit of hammered dulcimer as well. Kudos to you.
Hearing it was way better then reading it! For your next reading I would suggest slowing down just a mite. Your words slung together too much in spots. Other then that I loved how you kept with a traditional Irish feel, it's not an easy thing to do, but then if you're Irish I'm sure its second nature. I love the history and the reading and I'm glad you posted this as you had. WELL DONE!
I like it how you teach me to know history better with this poem, and how you are enthusiastic to pick interesting men and women to make them your way - unforgettable. Great tribute and flawless versification. I especially liked the classically attuned words choice.
Renmore, Galway, Ireland, An Roinne Mór, Gallaimh, Eire, Ireland
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