Out of Tune

To be a well used piano... that is what we should aim to be in life!

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Reviews

[FlawedByDesign]

Quite a wonderful composition with the music and words not to mention the picture of the broken down piano. That picture says a thousand words and give credence to the story at hand. I don' think the poem would have had the same impact had you not posted the audio version. It's always beautiful to hear the writer recite his work the way he meant it to be read - Thank you!

Beautifully done!

[Amaunet]

beautiful job! can't say much more than that

[The Doctor]

everything was mixed and placed very well. your voice lined up with the music perfectly. the broken piano reminds me of a lot of things and it's a perfect touch to bring your poem to life

[Richard Williams]

Bravo...excellent, beautiful and very moving. An outstanding effort.

[Abdul Aziz]

Congratulations on winning. I do not have much to say here, except that it is beautiful, and is one of the best poems I've read on Writers Cafe! And the music definitely was a great addition :)
100/100

[Awdures]

Beautiful, and haunting, made more poignant by the music and your narration. Lovely work here. Thank you ever so much for sharing.

[Rae]

Great poem. The music worked so well with all of it.

[The Fatal Lover]

Very very beautiful. I loved it a lot. Great job. =)

[Ashley.M.E]

This is a wanderful poem, well done.

[Rose Tyler]

This is beautiful. That's the only word I can find to describe this.