I'm speechless. Such a powerful piece dealing with such a tragic subject and yet somehow you've found a way to make it beautiful. I think it's in the words you've carefully chosen and the justice that history brought to the end of that time.
'But God was with them in their final hours' Yes, beautifully written. Brought a tear to my eye and a sigh to my lips. Thank you for sharing it.
One of the most enduring scourges in human history.
How terrible and how fearful what humans can do to each other.
And there shall be consequences and debts to be paid...
I wish I'd have written these words. This generation knows little of the hate of the Reich and its mission. Least we forget and suffer it all over again. kYour word are beutiful and need to be sent to every coner of the earth.
Wow, very powerful. Love the anger in this poem as well as the religious undertones. Usually historically-based poems tend to be a little strange, but this one worked well. Your passion for the subject is evident through your strong language and imagery. I really enjoyed reading this. =)
Im glad all of you have liked it so much, pity its topic is so true. The typos I really must work on, I'll be redoing all the videos when I get the chance, I just do them for fun at the moment, so they are not 100% correct for grammer, spellings etc. I appreciate those who point them out!!!!
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