The Silent Diner

Everyone wondered who ate everything...

::: The Silent Diner

The mouse from his mouse hole peeped
Cautiously to see
If there danger lurked about
As in a cat who’d eat a mouse like he.
And, spying that there was none there
Across the floor he scurried
To where fallen on was some food
To which he hastily hurried.

And upon reaching he ate his fill
All the time looking out
For he who eats can be eaten
Should the cat come about
And once his fill he had ingested
Back to his mouse hole he skips
The silent diner in the restaurant
Who never eats or tips!
 

Reviews

[Seriana]

Oh how cute! What a nice, upbeat little poem. I like it! I can imagine it, as though it is some cartoon. Thanks for the lovely write!

[Erin Hogan]

this is adorable!
i love the way you set the poem up, the flow is perfect =] its such an unique idea for a poem!

[Jane Doe]

This is a really cute and fun poem. I enjoyed it greatly. Good work!

[~crazy Beautiful~]

i loved this one
so cute
and quite creative
the end was the best part
"Back to his mouse hole he skips
The silent diner in the restaurant
Who never eats or tips! "
nice work
thank you for entering my contest