Stuck in the Friendzone

Stuck in the Friendzone

A Poem by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
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Love gets to easier with age, especially when you fall into the trap of being freinds first, before moving closer... such is love, and such is life...

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Stuck in the friend zone, her heart is bruised,
By a fool who knew not what he had…
When gone they are forever the song says,
Good girls gone bad…
I, poet, life’s romantic,
Too late, prehaps in this game,
Due to the folly of a fool before…
Such is life, cruel, hard, the shame!
The Gods of Love, abandoned their jobs
When Christ came the world to rule,
Men like me write of broken hearts,
Where the cad is a hero, and the lovers a fool…




© 2015 Tomás Ó Cárthaigh


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I read your excerpt first...I believe you want to say "no easier"...in there...and then went on with the verse...you put for presentation...the follies for which this takes us...and the description...defines the lines of this work...you can read this over & over and still the equation stands...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

9 Years Ago

Indeed - another of my infamous typos! Glad you liked it...



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wow, yes, we get the part of her that can only be friends, because the heart of her that could love has been broken beyond repair...seconds is not a good thing in this case, at all.

nicely expressed, Tomas.

j.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good poem. I have to read that last line again. Your words make me think. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I read your excerpt first...I believe you want to say "no easier"...in there...and then went on with the verse...you put for presentation...the follies for which this takes us...and the description...defines the lines of this work...you can read this over & over and still the equation stands...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

9 Years Ago

Indeed - another of my infamous typos! Glad you liked it...

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Renmore, Galway, Ireland, An Roinne Mór, Gallaimh, Eire, Ireland



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