What are you doing?

What are you doing?

A Screenplay by T.Langham
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Mate one finds mate two doing something odd.

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What you doing?

 

Mate one: You all right mate?

 

Mate two: Yeh, you?

 

Mate one: What you doing exactly?

 

Mate two: Sorry

 

Mate one: What you doing?

 

Mate two: Not much, you?

 

Mate one: What you on about, I’m not asking if your doing anything…well I am… you know what I’m on about.

 

Mate two: I’m not sure I do.

 

Mate one: Stop pissing about

 

Mate two: Pissing…

 

Mate one: …about, yes. Stop it, I’m asking you what your doing.

 

Mate two: Your asking me…

 

Mate one: …what your doing. For Christ’s sake, your sitting cross-legged, onto of a table, with your eyes closed, holding half a pint of milk, and wearing a sombrero, and I’m asking you why your sitting cross-legged, onto of a table with your eyes closed, holding a pint of milk and wearing a sombrero.

 

Mate two: And a friendship bracelet. (he holds up his wrist and jingles the bracelet.)

 

Mate one: (looks stunned)

 

Mate two: You all right. Bit quite.

 

Mate one. Just why mate, why.

 

Mate two: I’m pondering the creation of the universe.

 

Mate one: Just looks confused. (mate three walks on)

 

Mate three: What’s he doing?

 

Mate one: Pondering the creation of the universe.

 

Mate three: Deep. Cinema anyone.

 

Mate two: Sounds good. (Getting down from the table)

 

They walk off screen, leaving mate one confused. You hear mate two off screen say:

 

Mate two: Friendship bracelet?

 

Mate three: Cheers mate, means a lot. 

© 2015 T.Langham


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