Cease III

The walk of life,
Of people and of awareness,
To the strides of your gait,
To the endeavors of your whole,
Know that we are all
part of an equilibrium.

To the shadow that hounds light,
The positive disposition and temperament of humanity,
May not be defeated by time.
Men; by nature,
Are their own nightmare.

Ultimately,
We are all one,
And shall return to the one.

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I feel a bit like I’m reading an instruction manual to disparity but I already started this train ride so I’m all ears but I’m feeling kinda scared now I do prefer this to string theory that really scared me

[kentuck14]

Another interesting take on the existence and non-existence of the human body and soul. Not sure of your meaning in the 2nd stanza . . . Again, not sure of your ending. I see you have written these in a series titled Cease. Have you pondered these ideas since '16?
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[Rye]

Men; by nature,
Are their own nightmare.

Too true, just joking, I like this part though. nicely presented.

[Tom27]

Haha, i like that part too! Thank you :)

[Blackheart]

This is really beautiful. Signifying the cycle of life and death so magnificently. Indeed, we all are one and return to the one.

[Tom27]

Thank you! You grasped the feel of it :)