Frozen

As a chill goes down my spine 

The cold consumes me   

As I lay there 

Slowly dying 

Snow falling all round  

as my life I lived flash in front of my eye

 

The things I done

 

Amount to what?

 

The mountain I climb

 

Seem to take up my time

 

Nothing else

 

Made sense

 

The time I spent

 

Now bleeding out

 

The coldness put me down

 

Like a dog

 

Reviews

[Joseph Aldridge]

Woah. Great poem. I loved it. :) Keep on doing your thing.