Closer

Closer

A Poem by Tks
"

If only..

"

If only we were slightly closer

Things might be different


Seeing you would be a reality

Smelling you would be all I would ever do

Hearing your voice

Is the mellifluous music my soul has thirsted for

And will dance to

Feeling your warm skin against me

As we lay under a blanket of stars

Ready to visit the Moon, Mars,

Perhaps Pluto.


If only we were slightly closer

Perhaps all I would ever know

Would be the taste of your lips against mine..

As we dissolve into fiery brimstone

And hellfire

All I will ever know

Is salty seawater

As the Seven Seas stand sentinel

Between us.

© 2015 Tks


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B
Longing for someone with such intensity
and wishing they were close
to love
and hold
to share a life

simply
Beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sensual and touching tale of longing and love.
Enjoyed the mesmerizing imagery!
Keep up the great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a lovely inspiring write

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lovely lines serving each lines with nature's soothing feel

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful and so very relatable....a splendid write dear author :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love and people separated by ocean or land. Leave us in a limbo.
"All I will ever know
Is salty seawater
As the Seven Seas stand sentinel
Between us."
I enjoyed the poem. Create places and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry,
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice work Tks :) Glad to see ya writing on here :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind review, Aaron! Good to see yourself again as well, hope things are going well fo.. read more
A relatable poem that is dripping with longing...well-done

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Thank you FT! It means a lot to receive a compliment from an accomplished writer like yourself :)
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dan
Your wording is so resonant with naked emotion, it made me immediately remember situations in my life in which I wanted to say something to another, so desperately...but we just weren't on that level of closeness required for such personal feelings to come out. And THEN years later wondering why I didn't just take a chance and voice my support. Your wordplay in this piece, Tks, is outstanding. Very nicely done...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Dan, your reviews always leave me wondering as to how there are still people in the world who are go.. read more
dan

9 Years Ago

To get a good review the writer has to write a good piece. It's that simple. Thank you for YOUR kind.. read more
Painted a marvelous picture with these fantastic words:)
Well penned, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing James! Glad to see you once again, and my heartfelt appreciation for your encou.. read more

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Pasir Ris, Pasir Ris, Singapore



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