What would I do without you?

What would I do without you?

A Poem by Tks

Just last night
I appreciated with all of my might
What would happen if you left this world before me
Nay, I say, No!
I see no purpose for living, no reason for 
Spring to bloom
Summer to enjoy
Autumn to tuck in cosily

I see only Winter
The sharp, howling winds
The frostbites surround me with 
A marvellous vengeance
Mocking my earlier arrogance
The Earth dances with the Sun
Alas, the Moon!
Cheeky thing she is, 
She steals the show sometimes

The clock ticks away
Tick-tock
A second down
Tock-tick
Two seconds down
Is time on my side
The clock indeed has 
Two Cupid arrows
Don't be stupid
Tick-tock
My heart skips a beat
Tick-tock
Another beat is skipped 
I see you
Feel you
Smell your intoxicating scent
Another beat
A toast!
To my dark-haired damsel
Pour that disgusting concoction
Till we can't find our mouths no more
I am back in this damned darkness

Memories a gathering light
Normal people have no idea how beautiful the dark is
With you
It is getting dark, my love...
Very dark...
Very...
...
..
.

© 2015 Tks


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Wow! This was so deep and emotional.
I hate to imagine the thought of living my life without my love being around.
Great job Tejash!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Hey Ishita, thank you for stopping by:) Yes, the world can be a frightening place without them arou.. read more
This is really good my friend, wow, the end couldn't have been any better. I felt
emotion all the way through, you kept my attention on heighten alert for sure,thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Hey James, your reviews are always deeply appreciated:) I like how you take the time to read my poem.. read more
"Just last night
I appreciated with all of my might
What would happen if you left this world before me
Nay, I say, No!
I see no purpose for living, no reason for"

I love the way this poem starts out and set the foundation for the rest of the poem.
awesome job with this piece :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Hey Aaron, thanks for stopping by, my friend! Have an awesome day ahead, looking forward to your new.. read more

Hey there Tks,

What a wonderful write, no less than a good read. I can sense your deep affection for that lovely damsel. Moreover, I am amazed by the British touch (re: cosily) with some Shakespearean tone. Splendid! It's captivating from start to finish.

Kind regards,
Lavender

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Hi there Lavender! Yes, she is special:) gosh, I'm blushing just thinking about her now hahaha! I re.. read more
Lavender Soya

9 Years Ago

Hahaha Awwee. I felt my zygomatic muscles move. That made me smile! I am happy for you. It's really .. read more
This is so wonderful!! The ending was so beautiful and fragile.. It almost made me want to cry.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tks

9 Years Ago

Hey Cool Girl:) thank you for your kind, wonderful words.. they always inspire me to do better. Yest.. read more
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Awe, im so happy that you enjoy my reviews! You're very welcome:)

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Tks

Pasir Ris, Pasir Ris, Singapore



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Hi there, welcome to my humble abode! *bows deeply* My name is Tks, which are initials for my real name, which is too long, HAHAAHA. (ok, it's Tejash Kumar Singh) I absolutely love to live life.. more..

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