Wow! This was so deep and emotional.
I hate to imagine the thought of living my life without my love being around.
Great job Tejash!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Hey Ishita, thank you for stopping by:) Yes, the world can be a frightening place without them arou.. read moreHey Ishita, thank you for stopping by:) Yes, the world can be a frightening place without them around. I am sure your prince charming will soon sweep you into his arms forever! Have a good day ahead!
This is really good my friend, wow, the end couldn't have been any better. I felt
emotion all the way through, you kept my attention on heighten alert for sure,thanks for sharing and b-blessed.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Hey James, your reviews are always deeply appreciated:) I like how you take the time to read my poem.. read moreHey James, your reviews are always deeply appreciated:) I like how you take the time to read my poems carefully and recognise the nuances.
Thank you for stopping by, have a great day ahead!
"Just last night
I appreciated with all of my might
What would happen if you left this world before me
Nay, I say, No!
I see no purpose for living, no reason for"
I love the way this poem starts out and set the foundation for the rest of the poem.
awesome job with this piece :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Hey Aaron, thanks for stopping by, my friend! Have an awesome day ahead, looking forward to your new.. read moreHey Aaron, thanks for stopping by, my friend! Have an awesome day ahead, looking forward to your new writing:)
What a wonderful write, no less than a good read. I can sense your deep affection for that lovely damsel. Moreover, I am amazed by the British touch (re: cosily) with some Shakespearean tone. Splendid! It's captivating from start to finish.
Kind regards,
Lavender
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Hi there Lavender! Yes, she is special:) gosh, I'm blushing just thinking about her now hahaha! I re.. read moreHi there Lavender! Yes, she is special:) gosh, I'm blushing just thinking about her now hahaha! I really do love Shakespeare, Wordsworth, those poets from the Romantic Movement:) your poetry does spark some inspiration in me to write as well!
9 Years Ago
Hahaha Awwee. I felt my zygomatic muscles move. That made me smile! I am happy for you. It's really .. read moreHahaha Awwee. I felt my zygomatic muscles move. That made me smile! I am happy for you. It's really nice to have someone to like. I couldn't agree more. Those poets are brilliant! And thank you for feeling that way towards my poems. Keep writing! :-)
This is so wonderful!! The ending was so beautiful and fragile.. It almost made me want to cry.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Hey Cool Girl:) thank you for your kind, wonderful words.. they always inspire me to do better. Yest.. read moreHey Cool Girl:) thank you for your kind, wonderful words.. they always inspire me to do better. Yesterday night was a real tosser ahahha! Thank you once again, have a good day ahead!
9 Years Ago
Awe, im so happy that you enjoy my reviews! You're very welcome:)
Hi there, welcome to my humble abode!
*bows deeply*
My name is Tks, which are initials for my real name, which is too long, HAHAAHA.
(ok, it's Tejash Kumar Singh)
I absolutely love to live life.. more..